Reviews for Reconstruction
Revliledpembroke chapter 16 . 3/29
Of course he hadn't searched out a condom. He doesn't know what one is. If she had asked if he had protection, I bet he would have said that he was wearing his armor.
Revliledpembroke chapter 6 . 3/29
They don't need a new Guardian. Bringing Piccolo brought should have brought Kami back because Piccolo hadn't fused with Kami. Piccolo fused with Kami and matched 17 equally. "According to Future Trunks, his power far exceeded his alternate timeline counterpart."

So, Kamiccolo would have been stronger than Future 17, thus they haven't fused, and thus Kami is Guardian of Earth.
Kitty in the Box chapter 16 . 11/15/2016
I've read twice in a time and I'm so glad I did because I got to understand this even more. I absolutely love this and enjoyed it deeply. you are such a brilliant writer. I'm crying out of love.
MarcellaDuchamp chapter 16 . 9/12/2016
Yay a happy ending for the Mirai family! Thanks for the story.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21/2016
Oh god! I give up. Its humiliating to read such a sex craving weak Bulma.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2016
Its a shame that Bulma looses all control just to have some sex. Weak :(
Awkward Dork chapter 15 . 7/4/2015
Aw, this was cute. Glad it worked out... I hate the use of "hott" though. It's not a proper word. Not sure if that was accidental or intentional but I don't believe in it as a distinction from very warm in temperature. Sorry, it kind of ruined the chapter a bit for me :/.
Awkward Dork chapter 12 . 7/4/2015
OMG THIS WAS PERFECT. YES. OMG BABIES. YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS THIS IS SO EXCITING OMG *DIES* I love this so much. I was afraid based on the other story that I'd have to wait forever to see potential babies BUT THEY ARE HERE. *fans self* :D :D :D

The Yardrat stuff continues to be interesting and I found Vegeta's concern and frustration believable.

Awkward Dork chapter 10 . 7/4/2015
Again, it was so nice to see Mrs. Briefs remembered. True, she's not the most deep person, but she is very caring. Great to see Bulma's perspective. Wasn't underwhelmed this time :). Also holy shit, that encounter with Hedgero. Ahaha, exciting. Interested to see more of the time traveling :D
Awkward Dork chapter 9 . 7/4/2015
Ahh, so this must be why Future Vegeta knows Instant Transmission. Some cute bits here. Vegeta's sarcasm was refreshing and the high voice, ahaha. Nice. Yardrats seem cool. Curious about what Vegeta is proud of.
Awkward Dork chapter 8 . 7/4/2015
Not sure about how you wrote what Vegeta realized at the end of the chapter. I feel like the timing isn't best and he's admitting a bit too much, IMO. Like. "The whole Saiyan legend of mating with someone and sharing a mental connection was true. [...] This didn't make him happy on a lot of levels, number one being that he might die and never see her again." The last sentence here seems too emotional and thus "weak" to this prideful Vegeta. I'd imagine he'd still be trying to fight it a little, even though he's on the verge of death.

It just feels a little rushed. Hmm...
Awkward Dork chapter 7 . 7/4/2015
Hmm, I expected more drama between Future Bulma/Future Vegeta after reading Vegeta's POV for Twice Upon a Time first. It's happening more quickly than I expected, but then again, this is a spin-off. Still nice, but faster pace than the other story (of course). It's good to get more of Bulma's thoughts. Taking multiple perspectives on something can really give a more whole representation of an experience. That said, this was still a little underwhelming. Again, definitely not bad. Decent.
Awkward Dork chapter 6 . 7/4/2015
Interested to see how this will turn out :). Not much else to say... other than liking how Vegeta is appreciating some of Bulma's traits, calling her Saiyan-like. It's a start and sets you up well for later realizations.
Awkward Dork chapter 5 . 7/4/2015
The talk between Trunks and Bulma was beautiful. Captures a lot about them both, individually, and their relationship. It's nice to see them both want so desperately for Vegeta to turn around. United on that front.

Bulma's anger and worry for Trunks taking on the androids was really realistic... as was Vegeta being at a loss from being so much weaker than his son. Good.
Awkward Dork chapter 4 . 7/4/2015
I like the fire coming back to Bulma :). I'm glad that you did show how she changed. It fits perfectly with what she has gone through, but it's nice to see her find her spark again.

Also, the blueberry muffins. Mrs. Briefs tends to be overlooked, but I'm glad you've given her small, subtle, but significant moments in your writing. It does her justice. It's a sign of great writing when even the minor characters have life like that.
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