Reviews for Deliverance
Doubled-Helix chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Mother Nature came! _
About time.

WAAH! I want the old Jack back! Jack back. Hey, I rhymed!
A Striped Tigger chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
*Wince* Why can't Jack just make it easier for everyone?
bug349 chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
oh wow that was a really intense great chapter hope to read more
caitycaterpillar chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Ooooooooooh I can't WAIT till jack comes out of his shell-thing
Sheeijan chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
You know, I can't help but think that with all the grand, brutal plans that MiM had made and implemented, it would have been poetic justice if his precious, clueless Guardians derailed them all by killing the one that MiM deliberately made into what he is. I just can't get behind MiM and his methods. The ends doesn't justify the means and breaking someone down and allowing them to be tortured for years just doesn't fly with me. So yeah, I don't like Manny too much...
I.F.T.S chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Hell yeah lets be 20! Lets aim for thirty! AND I'm goin' help! Ohh, I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to next time! It's going to blow their minds more than this half!
beanie-art1 chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Lol well that sounds like a reasonably big plan XD jacks situation at the moment really reonds me of the documentrys I had to watch in school about feral children. We watched the one about an 8 year old girl who was raised by dogs, it's really interesting, if you get the chance go look it up :D

Ok went completely off topic there and now I've forgot what I was gonna write O_O... Erm... Awesome chapter and really can't wait for the next one :3 and have fun on holiday in the forest, remeber, don't accept any tacos from strange bears... O_O... I have no idea what I'm saying any more, I think my teas been drugged... See you next chapter :{D
Kiss-My-Asphalt chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
I knew it she was totally gonna show up ! I feel so bad for Jack though it doesn't look like he will ever get better :'( but I am still holding out hope for him ;)
Daughter of Wisdom and Music chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Have a nice vacation!
Taranodongirl1 chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
That was an excellent chapter, and have fun on your vacation.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Nooo why doesn't the forest have wifi?
Never mind, I'll wait...I wonder who the girl is...
MagentaScribe chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
update soon
moonshroom420 chapter 9 . 7/24/2013
does 'Jack' still remember Mother Nature? or has Jökul absolutely taken over? cuz theres gotta still be a bit of Jack left. Pitch coudlnt have taken all he was away, right? naha, he better not have. poor, poor Jack and poor Guardians too. They all sound really beat. Wonder why Jack's so afraid of Sandman...
AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 9 . 7/24/2013
This is a awesome chapter i really loved it and can't wait for pitch to show up with all that fear and guilt he is bound to be hanging around there looking forward to the next chapter
Kiss-My-Asphalt chapter 8 . 7/22/2013
This story literally made me cry! I feel so bad for Jack :'( he needs some love. You should have Mother Nature come back to help Jack. Please update soon :)
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