|Reviews for Deliverance|
| jsuislfrost chapter 4 . 6/11/2013
holy freakin crap. that sounded like it hurt soooo much! POOR JACK! Update really fast he HAS to get out of there! make him get out please!
| jsuislfrost chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
wooo. i am seriously at a loss for words. and my keyboard isnt helping.
| jsuislfrost chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
wow; heavy. im seriously nearly crying. jack sounds like a little boy and hes really hurt!
| jsuislfrost chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
holy crap iv got the shivers! i totally agree; Pitch shudder.
| Jokermask18 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
So sad but so very good.
| RezzKat chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
You broke him.
I am so speechless right now and I have the most disbelieving smile on my face because I am so positive that this is a joke.
WAAAAAHHHHHHHH! JAAAAACCCCCKKKKKKKK WHY?! *sniffle* I just- I can't- I- And he- And I- AND AHHHHHHHHHHHH HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I think I'm just typing nonsense now, but I don't care... I had to yell at my mom because she's watching T.V and it's a happy show and now is no time for happiness! Oh my god I am still freaking out WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
*inhale* *exhale* It's okay... I've been prepared for this. I've watched him die- Twice. It'll be okay.
But breaking is so different D:
I'm okay. I'll see you next update, because I still believe in you and I still love you as an author... But My God that update better be soon!
| michaela95 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
Love the story! Sooooooo sad though :(
| Taranodongirl1 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
| bug349 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
oh no Jack thats sooo sad im now crying it was a great chapter hope to read more
| Daughter of Death and Magic chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
Do you mean cracking nuckles in a space above the keyboard or using the keyboard to crack your knuckles because the latter option would just give you a line of gibberish instead of a chapter so it seems counter-productive. But what do I know? Hope the unicorns are treating you well. Peace!
| SerenadeInTheMoonlight chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
This is amazing, absolutely haunting. Can't wait for more!
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
| RezzKat chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
Ooo Literally cracking eh? Hehehhehe
Awwwwww little Jack got some sleep! But then PITCH RUINED IT! *huff*
And I'll blow your house down! Hahahha!
Oh my god I am so stupid XD
Anyways, I love how Pitch's name for Jack sounds all creepy and such, but it's just the Scandinavian version of his name! I find that really cool and creative. Also, I think you just answered my question from my last review that Yes, Mother Nature was in the books. But was she Pitch's daughter? Hmm... Maybe I will Google it!
*20 minutes later* (I got side tracked)
OHHHHH OKAY! That is definitely the true thing there!
OKAY! No longer am I confused! Although Mother Nature is very mysterious...
Please update soon!
| RezzKat chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
AHHHHHHH PITCH YOU FRICKIN JERK! Oh how I had stronger language ready for this moment... I'mma cry now! Poor little Jacky boy is so young and alone and injured and scared and OH GOSH IT'S SO DEPRESSING! *sniffle*
Why does the Moon speak to Mother Nature but not Jack?! this thing could've possibly been avoided!
Speaking of this thing can you explain something to me? I know a lot of people use Mother NAture as Pitch's daughter, so was that mentioned in the books (That I never got to read :( ) Or is that just a common choice? And not that I'm complaining (I'm totally fine with it) but how does Pitch: The King of Nightmares have a daughter that is Mother Nature: The, Literal, Mother of Nature?!
It hurts my head to think about it...
ANYWAYS I AM OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| RezzKat chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
OH MY GOSH WHY COULD I NOT FIND THIS!?
I am such a terrible person! I was so excited for this and then I deprived myself of it because I didn't know you'd wrote it yet! I THOUGHT I PUT YOU IN MY ALERTS! I was just skimming through my list of Favorite authors and I saw you and I said, "Well hey, this gal owes me a new story, what the heck is taking so long?" I click and I get to your profile and I look at your stories and I say... "?I don't recognize this one... Did she-?" *gasp* "SHE DID! OHMYGOD! OHMYFREAKINGGOD! HOLYSNAPCHEESE!" Then I clicked and here I am and I am sooooo excited I swear I'll do a better review once I've caught up! (So on Chapter 3) I would do a good review now but I AM JUST SO EXCITED THAT Y GRAMMER RIGHT NOW IS CRAP BECAUSE I AM TYPING SO FAST ILL PROBABLY COME BACK AND FIX MOOST OF IT MAYBE WHEN IM DONE BUT OH MY GOSH I HAVE TO GET TO THE NEXT CHAPTER NOWWWWW!
Oh... I forgot to let go of the Shift key...