Reviews for Deliverance
Sparky chapter 4 . 1/13/2015
But...but... No! You can't... But... Gaaaah!
Sparky chapter 3 . 1/13/2015
Oh no, the first Nightmare! Poor Jack. But I'm glad he's so strong! I doubt I would be
Sparky chapter 2 . 1/13/2015
Oooooooh, you made Jack hurt... This is such a great story!
Sparky chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Oh... Oh you did not just... But you did and I love it. Haha
FrostedFeathers chapter 16 . 12/13/2014
Excellent story! Can't believe I'm only finding it now but I will probably be re-reading it many times more! It was incredibly well written and beautifully entertaining! You sparked so much emotion; something which is a joy to see - I really went through everything the characters were feeling (which was a bit of a rollercoaster :P). You also nailed the characterisations - each one was spot on throughout the story!

I cannot praise you enough and can't wait to read what you have planned next! Great job! :D
Taranodongirl1 chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
never ever delete this fanfic ever! way too many ROTG fanfics have been deleted and most of them were on my favorites
Nikki Pond chapter 16 . 8/28/2014
I have finally finished reading and I am glad it's over. But I do want the sequel. Great words, lots of big words, but full of light out of the darkness. You did remarkably well and I am now wondering what do you mean 'He will be like you've never seen him before'

How different Jack will be? I find it strange that Jack did not say anything *(not much) even though he's the main character.
Kangarooney chapter 8 . 8/27/2014
I think the mot powerful part of this story so far, was when you made Sandy cry. I mean, in my mind, Sandy is kind of invincible - ignore the fact where he died, remember when he came back to life. That he would cry over injuring some creature that attacked him and his friends, makes my heart go all fuzzy. That was a fabulous , I like your vocabulary. A lot of people think you don't need multiple words for the same meaning, I think it's extremely necessary. If you said "After they left, Sandy cried." my reaction wouldn't have been quite so much. But because you used "wept" my brain was appeased. Besides, "wept" is a better word than "cried".

Crying is like openly showing your sadness and asking for a hug. While weeping is more silent and to yourself, it's an internal sadness.

Okay. Enough gabbing - it's just when I come across an idea I like that's been written well... well I can't help it! It makes me happy. :) Thank you for making me happy.


P.s. You're probably like: "This long of a review just because I wrote 'wept'?" And I'll say: "Yes. Because I think you get it. Why we have so many different words for the same meanings. I think you're one of the few who really gets it."
Twistedfangirl chapter 11 . 8/7/2014
You could have ended it. You could have saved us from the continued pain. UGH! This is very well written though. I like it a lot. I will definitely read the rest. It made me tear up actually.
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 16 . 8/6/2014
Great job :) am excited for your new story :)
Daughter of Death and Magic chapter 16 . 8/2/2014
Whoop! Whoop! Can't wait!
Brenne chapter 16 . 8/2/2014
I'm glad Jack is finally with his mother. Great story! Thanks! :D
AlchemistLeigh95 chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
OHMYGOSH! I loved this chapter! I loves how throughout this story you brought in the bible! You even quoted one of my fav verses! *heart* You did an amazing job! I adore this story so much I can't even put it into words! *gives you a huge hug*
Daughter of Death and Magic chapter 15 . 7/15/2014
That was beautiful. I was crying and then I was laughing with joy and then crying because this wonderful story is over. This fantastic journey you have led us readers on with the written word has come to an end. But what an adventure it was. Thank you for taking your time to create such a wonderous work of art. Thank you for allowing me to spend part of my day reading your awesome story. :)
Guest chapter 15 . 7/13/2014
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