Reviews for The Aesculapian Serpent
Albionia chapter 1 . 7/30
I love this, absolutely brilliant. Have you ever considered expanding it? (Don't worry if you don't want to, it's your story lol).
TeaGrannymcmlx3 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Hello... great story, I am currently reading through all you stories posted here one after the other as I like your writing style. I noticed in few of them you use the phrase 'hang from his/her lips' I believe the phrase you are looking for is ' hang on his/her words' or 'hanging on every word'. Great stories but the phrase you are using is a little awkward. Please continue to writing, I am certain I am not the only one who would miss your contributions.

Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
I didn't know that Severus had the word 'awesome' in his vocabulary.
RambleSchapalon chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Hmm, a bit rushed towards the end. I would have liked it to show more Severus and Harry bonding, but other than that, it was a fun read. :)
siuirsblack910 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
loved it
angiestar17 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Hello:) will you write a sequel to this story? I love it
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Narnia and Harry Potter 4 EVER chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
briilant story!
daisy.tya chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
xd hihihi lol Servus xd ('I'm the luckiest Potions Master in the world if my ward owns such an awesome familiar.')
Noxy the Proxy chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
This was really neat. Your short stories are great!
Laura chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Great story well done
ak chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
son serpent aurait pu le guérir, non?
un enfant qui disparait; comment les dursleys vont ils pourvoir l'expliquer à la police? :)
PerSonNee chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Ahaha cuty story!
ruth hammond chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Loved it!
Hope06 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
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