Reviews for Desperately Out-manned with No Allies
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22
thank you so much for this story. I just finished reading it and I enjoyed it immensely. I didn't bother to sign in but, my ff name is newestcullen if you are curious. I appreciate an author who not only writes well but has more than just a rudimentary command of the language. yes I agree that so often bella is just a hapless victim to Edward, as well as others and found it refreshing to see her assert her will and strength of character in this fashion. I was also glad that you avenged james and Victoria. I felt sure that bella's sense of fairness would not allow her to remain silent on that issue. I hope that you do visit the land of ff again, I would enjoy reading more of what you have to offer. thank you again for a thoroughly enjoyable story. respectfully, newestcullen aka judy.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/2
Is this whole story gonna be a haughty bella and a stupid edward? Cus if so think I'll be more than happy to give it a miss.
LAB1 chapter 24 . 5/26
I loved your story! Bella rocked! Thank you for writing a story where Bella didn't fangirl for a pretty face!
ShaSha12 chapter 3 . 5/7
I hate how Jasper sounds so rude in this chapter, and you made Edward sound dumb. Suppose a ruler to be shouldn't sound childish at all. And Bella is a bitch- I like that.
Good job overall
lola0930 chapter 1 . 4/6
Amazing story. I'm glad I stumbled upon it!
ReaderKat chapter 24 . 3/29
Very interesting story, full of intrigue and drama. I really like your smart, wise, strategizing Bella - she made a great queen. Thanks for sharing!
CharlotteKandie1221 chapter 1 . 3/28
AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH! what is is i see a badaas bella! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGGGGGGGGGGG! i love love love this
TheMrsW chapter 24 . 3/24
Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
leylinjan chapter 24 . 2/2
you say you've been playing around with original work - but I see no reason why you couldn't use this story as original work. change the names, and some other little things, and you'll have a GREAT original work right there!
I loved this story :)
bellawu chapter 1 . 1/31
love bella already! :)
Twiheart1901EC chapter 24 . 1/25
This was a really captivating story! Thanks u for writing, I truly loved it all.
FinnMac chapter 24 . 1/14
Thanks for the story. Is it weird that the one thing I wonder about is whether Isabella and Rosalie end up friends?
FinnMac chapter 23 . 1/14
Isabella is slick.
FinnMac chapter 22 . 1/13
i would have preferred James be drawn and quartered, but I'm just glad he's dead.
FinnMac chapter 21 . 1/13
The three witches are captured at last.
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