Reviews for Fate SealNight
Guest chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Persona summoning would be a personal skill, a NP is the sumbol of the hero, so minatos would be the universe or his wild card ability. I would also like to point out having 2 or more NPs is rare
Bitjama chapter 3 . 5/26/2013
Nothing wrong so far, but Minato's luck should be high up on his stats with his STR and SPD at B at normal form. Augment or change stats depending on persona. Like a Null All abaddon giving him a VIT of EX but with STR and SPD of D. your choice of course.
Han-Ko chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
You did great. I liked the fight. Good luck and Health befall on you
Pikachu Angel the 1st chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Selias chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
So, he got enough mana to summon his persona from draining Lancer?
Kinunatzs The Eternal chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
though i was thinking that if he equip a Persona he gets the whole or half of the Persona's Parameters plus with his own or his parameters is like his persona so he should be par to Lancer if he use Cu Chulain he should be par though his Strength should be D-Rank and just you know when he enhance his speed by 6 times he should be faster than Lancer C30x6180 his at least three to five times faster than Lancer why is he slower than him? and if we go by you stats sheet his speed should be C30x3 90 thanks to the effect of the Sukukaja and Hallowed Boots his still faster than lancer and he should have the Persona's magecraft and weapon skill when he uses them you already told that few chapters back where Rin ask Minato about his sudden change of personality
HellPwnage1337 chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
To comment on your explanation: I don't think that summoning a low level persona like Orpheus or Pixie would take away that much mana and he should be able to use it easy in the battle against Lancer, but I would assume that if he were to summon someone like Thanatos or Helel would need him to be charged up that much. But it's a good story, keep it up and I agree that Minato shouldn't be overpowered but I honestly think you limited him a little too much. He still should be able to summon Orpheus at this state.
cj1of4 chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
This is fairly good. My only complaint is how much Minato is lecturing Rin about Servants and such. I feel she should already know most of the stuff he is telling her.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
make it so that each persona, if they have a strong enough will and determination, pratically force their way out of minato's soul.
Will chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
I have to say, I am impressed. You're pretty dedicated to write 4 chapter in 4 day. The story you make is pretty interesting, and I guess you're enthusiastic in writing this story. I look forward for the battle scene on the next chapter, and If I may suggest maybe you can pair Minato with saber. Keep up the good work and I await your next chapter
bon123 chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
Guest chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
this is great so far looking forward to the skirmish with Lancer. Will Rin witness her servant unique abilities against Lancer or will he just gauge him normal like the orignal archer?
Selias chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
Jeez, is Minato the Throne of Heroes, or something?
Kinunatzs The Eternal chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
why not pair him with Rin? and i think Minato's Prana is EX-Rank example two Persona has E-Rank Prana and Minato has an E-Rank Prana and if you combine it all he will have an C-Rank Prana so if you combine all his Persona he got an EX-Rank Prana it's logical Persona is part of his Soul and even a piece of his Soul is equal to a full Servant and Magic Circuit is part of the soul and awesome chapter and more pls and don't forget the stats
roughstar333 chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
this is interesting keep on writing !
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