Reviews for The Only Exception
scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
hmm i can see maka's reaction to this but the rest of them? really? i mean soul has said these same words in front of every single one of them many times in the story. i cant see blair or blackstars reactions being like this and if they are soul would be one hundered percent correct to call them hypocrites. remember soul has been saying things like this scince he was twelve! he is somewhere between 16 and 18 by the point in the story the spatori are formed that is six years of this he has as much right to claim hey childhood stupidity carry over as blackstar does in their conversation
tsubaki has lectured maka for taking souls stupid comments to seriously in cannon before so i have a hard time seeing her come after soul like black-star implies she would too
eh though i nitpick you did a fairly good job with this soul and maka are both beliveable and the story is well writen
would prefer it without the little aside scenes with Blair and Black-star though think it means more if he dealt with it without the external influences
this is the guy after all who swings between calling her the most uncool bookworm ever and the coolest partner ever so i suspect their relationship has gone through a few more mild forms of this in the past
FW Wandering chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Sweet.
k.c.baby chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Omfg. I love how Kid saved her and I love the way Black Star was all protective over her/ This is just perfect. Love it.
I likedyourstory chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
So cute
Flying Turtle chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
This was amazing