Reviews for Lelouch of Pendragon
Vanillamoo chapter 6 . 11/17/2013
Really cute fic!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/31/2013
Can't believe Marianna gave in soooo quickly, wise choice though haha. Love the last kinky part, just... Love it...
Kisane-chan chapter 6 . 6/15/2013
I really do love this fanfic, although i wish you could have used seperation lines or something to make the separation of scenes more obvious than they were. I had to re-read it a bit in some places as such, to try to understand what happened, or rather why some events took place when the mood was totally off. One more thing, I wish you could have detailed the surroundings and location more at times, especially during Lelouch and Suzaku's 'first time', as I tried to maneuver in my mind how the two were positioned. (I'm not trying to be too negative here, I just want to help you get better. :3 )

As a yaoi writer myself, I like how you set the mood in the smexy scenes, and kept the characters, well, "in-character". A lot of fanfic writers don't keep the personalities of the characters, and if they do, it's normally not all of them. I appreciate that you kept the characters well. :D
Luluchi chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
uwaaah
I want more, I love them both soo much /
The story is amazing! :D
Though I do want to know what the drink thing was all about, you could definitely continue the story with that happening.
It could turn into something big
like someone was trying to kill him? ouo
ItsRandom chapter 6 . 5/30/2013
I ship this 2 so much _. Hot and steamy, just the way I like it
rebelserenade chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
More please. I like your story :D
Snowflake97 chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
Lots of love to this fiction. Please update soon :)
Kuroshitsuji95 chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
I love this! Please write a new chapter real soon! 3 3
kay-kw33n chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
more please update
the allen walker chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
Sounds interesting. Can't wait to read and find out more.
kay-kw33n chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
more please