Reviews for Heart on the Floor
EmpressMinea chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
I'm pretty, pretty shocked about this:" My son...wants...to see his lover."

Any sequel please?
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Oh man! Did he ever end up saying 'I love you'?
mywinterfireflies chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Write more pls
Hanako-chan chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Hi! Hanako-chan desu! Nice story, a little cliché, but that is not a bad thing... Actually I love well written cliché like this one. The theme is something I am arfraid of, my loved ones being hurt in someway. That's why I get so into the character suffering and waiting to see what happens. Does he live? Does not? Suspenseeeee...
Aand the other thing that particulary affected me, was when Takano tells Ritsu "You can't abandon a friend but you can abandon me... Great, that's just great", cuz that's been thrown at me, by my boyfriend, and my reaction was exactly like Ritsu's: speechless. It's frustraiting being misundestood.
Great job, as always. You're my numer one fanfiction author! :3
Adept of the Angels chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Loved it! Almost made me cry, which is awesome cause its been a while since I read a story that can get me all emotional
Maria chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
I liked it, but they never caught the guy who did it, it would have been cool if takano tracked him down and ahem.../slits throat lol but other than that it was good.
Tentai.t chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Good job on the drama. I couldn't stop reading it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Thank you for not killing ritsu
Windying chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
geeze... please don't scare me like that... i was crying before I know it you know.. you should write this as a series now... is too good...
damons-hot-as-hell chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
awww thats cute
Kanda Yuuki chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
... for a moment, I thought you are going to kill Ritsu and I started shredding tears... thank you for not killing him and getting Takano and Ritsu together...
Ch3rry Chibi chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
nice! i love it!
Misakixxusagi chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Aw, that was so cute! :D And suppppperrrr dramatic! I loved the part when Takano saw his heart on the ground (cough cough, the title). You're getting reallly good at oneshots!
nekocandy4life chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
QAQ so beautiful urg! STOP MAKING ME CRY QAQ
but at least Ritsu's alive Muhahahaha:D
XD
PhantomhiveSebas chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
oh my gawwddd! When takano was just waiting while they were operating on ritsu, I don't know why but, I could feel myself shiver and get light headed as well. You were able to draw me into the situation to the point where I was feeling dizzy. My heart nearly stopped when the line , "My son...wants...to see his lover." came up. Overall, I like this!
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