Awwwww. This was so adorable. I laughed out loud, hard, when Edward apologized to Jake. It was adorable and hilarious at the same time.
I loved everything about this story.
Thanks for sharing!

Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing.

Oh my god, Jack the beanstalk ! Laughing my butt off.

He's so good at being comforting, like that.

Oh my, a Yankees fan, too funny.
This Bella is wild and crazy. A great chapter.

That is weird to hear a Boston accent, in a good way. Like how you jumped right into the action.

I can’t believe I’ve avoided this story for so long! It’s so sweet and perfect! Love it!

Aww loved it, thanks for sharing x

Feels weirdly appropriate to be rereading this story amid a lockdown of a different type. Will you write a sequel about them in quarantine?!

I been binge reading your stories for 2 days and one thing stood out for me. Edward always ask permission to kiss or to do anything further. I think that is great that you doing that, showing women how a man should treat his girl.

Nice job!

That comment Bella made was cringe worthy! How embarrassing! "its probably bad down there".…..ewww

Thank you!

This was amazing and I hope you write future outtakes.

loved this so much

I love everything about this. The story, Edward and Bella, Jake. Edward in a pink bathrobe. I've read it a few times and it always brings a little smile to my face.

Thanks for sharing :)