|Reviews for Breathless|
| Cassie chapter 1 . 1/4
Hell yes, it was hot! Eleven & Clara is so perfect for each other. Thanks for your story ;)
| Angel of the woods chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
This is an awesome story! One thing to watch out for when writing is tense changes. You change from past to present tense in the middle of your story. I also have this same problem and I am working on it. Otherwise totally fantastic story.
| Someone chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
This was really good!
You need to write more Clara and the Doctor stories
| Jess chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
HE WAS A FIRM BELIEVER IN LADIES FIRST. LOL! oh my gosh, this was perfect.
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Hot damn. That was amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Full of perfect little phrases. So good. And 100% kept up the class
| lokiqueen24 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I'm crying. this is perfect whouffle fan fic. THANK YOU. I - wow. Just yeah, woah. I loved it, I love 11/clara just...thank you, seriously.
| Pond423 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
you are amazing!
| Sugarqueen chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
It's good but there's a lot of spelling/grammar mistakes and you change tense a lot..makes it confusing
| Laffy-Taffy0401 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Ah eggas This was perf, but you already knew that ;*
| SageDeLannoy chapter 1 . 5/24/2013