Reviews for Breathless
Angel of the woods chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
This is an awesome story! One thing to watch out for when writing is tense changes. You change from past to present tense in the middle of your story. I also have this same problem and I am working on it. Otherwise totally fantastic story.
Someone chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
This was really good!
You need to write more Clara and the Doctor stories
Jess chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
HE WAS A FIRM BELIEVER IN LADIES FIRST. LOL! oh my gosh, this was perfect.
Counting Sinful Stars chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Hot damn. That was amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Full of perfect little phrases. So good. And 100% kept up the class
lokiqueen24 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I'm crying. this is perfect whouffle fan fic. THANK YOU. I - wow. Just yeah, woah. I loved it, I love 11/clara just...thank you, seriously.
Pond423 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
you are amazing!
Sugarqueen chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
It's good but there's a lot of spelling/grammar mistakes and you change tense a lot..makes it confusing
Laffy-Taffy0401 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Ah eggas This was perf, but you already knew that ;*
SageDeLannoy chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
adorable!