|Reviews for Hiro's Transformation|
| Saint Nick chapter 9 . 15h ago
This is definitely one of the best stories I've read. Hopefully Hiro will wake up soon and help Victor beat this guy. I hope this story follows the manga and not the anime and that this new duo plays a part in it.
| Master of Chimera chapter 9 . 1/17
They are idiots. And because of this, they can do whatever the fuck they want and when they seat a goal, nothing will stop them, not even death. They can handle themselves in awkward or dangerous situations, since they dive head-first into them all the time. It's pretty cool to be an idiot :3
K, stay awesome, PLEASE UPDATE OR IT WILL BE TOO MUCH HIATUS IN MY LIFE TO HANDLE, bye
PS: PEOPLE DIE IF THEY ARE KILLED!
| goodcookie14 chapter 9 . 1/16
Yay! New chapter! To answer your question, I think that Victor seems very brave...to the point that he might do something idiotic to be brave. I really love his character so far, though. Oh, and my chapter alert thing is working again so you don't have to PM when you have a new chapter. I look forward to the next installment!
| KnightSpark chapter 9 . 1/16
I say 25% of column A and 75% of column B.
| goodcookie14 chapter 8 . 11/25/2013
Sorry for not commenting sooner! My computers been messing around with my favorites/stories I'm following :(. I was only alerted to the fact that this had been updated when I got your email. Could you please alert me in that way when you update the story because I really like it and want to make sure I know when it's updated! I really like Victor so far (he seems like a great OC, there are WAY to many mary-sues running around out there). I can't wait to see what happens and hope to see an update soon!
| Master of Chimera chapter 8 . 11/21/2013
Absolutely wondeful indeed! I knew you wouldn't leave this poor child (story) orphan :D If you had, you would start getting this feeling that someone is breathing in your nape and would recieve threatening letters and stuff like that from a stalker that's not even in the same country! So yeah, thanks for updating and keep up the good work!
| JulCan1987 chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
This was an interesting update, looking forward to the next one. And I agree with you, Soul Eater looks like something that Tim Burton made.
| Master of Chimera chapter 7 . 11/16/2013
I'm still here! *points to herself with a big red arrow* I've been following this awesome thing from the beggining, and there would be NO FRIGGIN WAY for me to just drop it off! Thank you very much for updating and keep it up! Fuckin love it e-e
| goodcookie14 chapter 7 . 11/9/2013
I really like this story and Victor! Please update as soon as you can!
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
Good story. You're a Hiro fan too, right? Continue writing and update sooner please?
| Mika chapter 2 . 9/20/2013
Make the chapter eight, please?
| Akihanatsu chapter 7 . 9/19/2013
UPDATE,PLEASE! Well, this is not the point... Okay,your story caught (and still catching, ahaha) my interest (and eyes) on it. I will look further in reading this more! Good writing skills you have there (and what I have are only basic English!) - and nice style, too. Most SE fan..well... sort of 'abandon' Hiro-kun, which I think is very unreasonable. Believe it or not, Hiro-kun is one of my favourite character in Soul Eater! Good thing you centered him as the main character in this fanfiction! He needs some attention too right? And just wanna tell you, Atsushi Ohkubo did well in giving him some attention (for a mangaka, good he did not forget about his minority character) in the Excalibur chapter. Makes I wonder why there's no weapon wanted to be with him, he has good skills in controlling Excalibur! Well, sorry if it's long but I admire you. CIAO!
| eleedom13 chapter 7 . 9/19/2013
HEEEEEEEEEEEEY! UR BACK! AWESOME! pretty good chapter, i liked Stien's character development as well as Victor's . I thought i was cool how you causally dropped the type of weapon Hiro is in there, that was clever. as always I cannot wait to read more, but this time im even more excited :D
| JulCan1987 chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
I am enjoying reading this story. People like Hiro sometimes have secrets that even they don't know about. Please update as soon as you can.
| HipsterL chapter 6 . 6/29/2013
Well, these genes do run in the family, right? There must have been a family member that was a weapon somewhere. For some reason I doubt he would flip his crap all the sudden but would probably be in pretty deep denile and shock.