|Reviews for Please, Don't Have Laid Down Your Life|
| jinpachi toudou chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
the fcking title tho. god damn it ff
| AriaHikari chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
The big thing that kept me hoping Otome wouldn't die was that she still had Koharu : I felt like Joe and Ronaldo had no more reason to continue surviving (Joe's gf being dead and Ronaldo having passed the information on)...
But still, this fic was great, you really captured how I think both Koharu would react to the woman who's been your mom being dead...It's the main reason I've never killed off Otome in game. I really hope to see the anime include a little piece like this next episode.
RIP Otome, Joe, Ronaldo
| mirror of words chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
;_; Whyyyyy... I MEAN SERIOUSLy WHy.
Actually I was thinking how Koharu's gonna fare with Otome's death. Guess this somewhat explains it?
You expressed the emotions quite nicely. At first I was thinking Koharu's pretty calm about it (I might've missed a line or two) but later on ... ;_;
Thanks for writing this. ;_; Still not quite accepting the three's death though. Hope to see more soon. :3