Reviews for Swerve of Fate
dollindungarees chapter 1 . 3/25
Short & sweet.
Koshivuh chapter 7 . 1/20
Such a good story! Short and sweet :) Hopefully I'll read some of your other stories soon!
Koshivuh chapter 6 . 1/20
Wow, Alice is a little shit in this story. Oh, well, at least Bella has a backbone :)
Koshivuh chapter 4 . 1/20
Definitely the best chapter so far ;)
Koshivuh chapter 3 . 1/20
I'm not sure if I've been tearing up because of of the intensity of the story and/or because I've been super stressed out lately. In any case, this has been very good so far, and it's really cool to learn about something like this. It's very interesting.
Koshivuh chapter 2 . 1/20
Oh no :( I guess we're finding out some of the repercussions of the accident.
Koshivuh chapter 1 . 1/20
So I pretty much suck as a person. I've read a few of your stories now, my current favorite (and first) being Quarterback Rush, but this is the first time I'm reviewing. Because I suck. But mostly because I've primari been reading on my phone, like right now, and I hate typing on my phone :( But, if it's any conciliation I have liked everything I've read so far :) And this one seems like it's going to be really good! Anyway, I'll see you next chapte!
maggiegurle chapter 7 . 1/16
Another fab story. Loved little Maggie! Thanks! :o)
2old4fanfic chapter 5 . 1/13
Prom is so overrated... And I went and shepherded all my kids to at least two proms each. That's a lot of corsages
2old4fanfic chapter 2 . 1/13
A reunion fic! I love when writers write presents for their friends but we all get to read
marley01 chapter 7 . 10/21/2014
Another goodie, lovin your stories
wardlyman chapter 7 . 10/9/2014
Really? Fucking really? usually edward and bella past relationships play into the story but no, edward doesn't seem to have any yet he's so experienced. And bella...

It's not that i'm mad, i'm irritated with it. The things they say and do just contradict. I mean i get it, you wanted them to fuck like pornstars. But in reality to me, it just says the human body is just a tool. That's how it feels. Edward loved bella for 15 years. Even the time he was without her. But guess what? He dan fuck like a pornstar. He sure didn't get that by loving bella. And bella i belive she compared every guy to edward._ and they didn't live up... But that SUUUUURRRE didn't stop them from easing into her bed.

Call me shallow or naive, but if you gonna say love. It extends to your body too. Not just emotional.
wardlyman chapter 6 . 10/9/2014
Edward fucked alice? In the same timed he said to in love with bella?

Maybe i'm the only man who take sex serious. But fucking logic, you aren't clicking with someone. Know you are not settiling for him but you fuck him? Out of pity? It pisses me off in all stories like this, is that edward and bella ALWAYS find time to be with a person for what? A week then f him. Despite always loving eachother. Shits irritating.
wardlyman chapter 4 . 10/9/2014
Wait can we get this past relationships please... But bella by the sounds of it was in no position for a relationship neither edward imo... But their actions indicate their well versed in sex. I just didn't expect that... Were they both sluts or something? A vibrator doesn't make you gold at sucking a dick, and i doubt edwards a pedo...
Guest chapter 3 . 8/21/2014
I'm a speech pathologist and am loving the story!
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