|Reviews for Love At The Convenience Store|
| anime-trash10116 chapter 1 . 4/10
this is fcking beautiful
| DokidokiMariel46 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
hahahahahaah tht was so cuteeeeeeeeeeee! i needed that...i just read an angst sarumi fic TTwTT""" thankyou!
| usagi-strike chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
That was cute and funny! I kept breaking out into psychotic giggles.
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Hello there, I like your fanfic and it's so fluffy but there as some typos and forgive me if I'm quite the grammar nazi type. I just want to help you, no ill intentions, I swear.
Okay, so here it goes:
When using do,does,did always retain the base form of the verb.
Use capital letter for 'I' when referring to yourself for respect.
Use ' for the shorter terms of "I am and you are" , and others that needed to be put on an apostrophe.
Other than that, your fic is quite good and I enjoyed it. You're an Indonesian, yes? So the orignal f
| herecomestesun chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
aww this was cute! haha saru is so mean
| sweetsmasher chapter 1 . 5/24/2013