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Guest chapter 11 . 5/9/2018
I couldn't log into my account but I have to say I am happy to rediscover this story and I am hoping you can continue it because it really is titillating. I see its been 2013 but I hope you can dust of the cobwebs.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/1/2018
Wow I am so much in love with this story. I devoured it in a one sitting. It has to be the best oc story I've ever read. Alia seems so real and strong. I can't help but be attracted to khan. Will you be writing anymore chapters?
Lovethyneighbor chapter 4 . 9/22/2017
Type your review here. With my radio, Hi there. Everything about your story is perfect; it has just the right amount of suspence; but the short chapters does not fit the dynamic of the story; not complaining just want you to know with longer chapters you can make this into a book. Good luck!
galwidanatitud chapter 11 . 6/24/2017
Will you continue? I hope so. Awesome story. :-)
cypris88 chapter 11 . 1/17/2015
Last chapter? Noooo this is so sad! Any chance you haven't abandoned the story and would like a beta to review the next chapter? Or just want to bounce some ideas around? Please PM me if so! One of my own stories was on hold for like 1.5 years but I managed to turn around and finish it. One of the most rewarding things I've ever done.
cypris88 chapter 10 . 1/17/2015
Great chapter. Love how she messes with him and finds even the littlest ways to get under his skin!
cypris88 chapter 8 . 1/17/2015
"Do not mistake a certain skill at savagery for enjoyment of the same." Great line!

Alia does seem to be rather 'civil' with him after he tortured her for an unknown amount of time just earlier that day. It's not unbelievable, but does seem a little curious.
cypris88 chapter 7 . 1/17/2015
It's interesting to read Alia's thought process as she figures out a plan to survive this in one piece. I like how she decided to make him care for her, which is so wholly different from seducing him, and understood how it was a cruel but necessary tactic.
cypris88 chapter 6 . 1/17/2015
Such an interesting description of their kiss - a desperate primal scream supplies such a perfect visual. And I like how much it throws him off after it happens. Yep, that was you, John!
cypris88 chapter 5 . 1/17/2015
"You are very fragile, aren't you?" he murmured. "I shall have to be more cautious… When I hurt you, I want it to be deliberate."

This line made me shiver! In both good and bad ways! Haha
cypris88 chapter 4 . 1/17/2015
This chapter makes it sound like Alia's memories have been wiped, but I wonder if it's John's memories that are modified instead of hers!
cypris88 chapter 3 . 1/17/2015
Smart thinking for Alia negotiate with him, even for something small. Will hopefully set a precedence for later!
cypris88 chapter 2 . 1/17/2015
Final few moments of this chapter are great - how can you remember memories you don't have?
cypris88 chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Love the description of his voice and smile.
Sugarshock chapter 11 . 12/23/2014
I know I'm one person, but I REALLY hope this makes a difference: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue your story. Everything about this fic is beautifully written and the suspense is just wonderful. I would absolutely love to see where this story goes, please update!
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