Reviews for a not so golden life
mimico909 chapter 19 . 3/3
I liked the story but the dialog is awkward because people don't actually talk like that. But also e story just cut off is it done? I feel like it just stopped in the middle of the story and that there there were a lt of things just repeating in this story... And isn't this a romance between voldemort and harry? All they did was have a conversation in one of the last chapters
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 11 . 1/11
You already had Harry explain everything about the sorting to Severus...Twice would be fine if you hadn't made Severus act like he'd never heard it before. Also, you have WAY too many or too few commas. DX You have some major grammar issues, too. Please fix? You can sign up for a beta reader, you know.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/23/2014
I think its great so far. But there are too many commas.
Sraya chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
Why does Harry need contacts? aren't his eyes fixed?
Guest chapter 20 . 11/12/2014
Please update soon
shadewatcher chapter 10 . 10/28/2014
Muwahahahhahaaaa! Let it be said it is not wise to mess with Harry Potter or Severus Snape. XD
spk chapter 19 . 10/4/2014
Would love more of this... :)
Guest chapter 20 . 9/4/2014
More now please
thewolf74 chapter 20 . 9/3/2014
I love this story. I loved the verdicts of the five defendants. Is there a sequel to this story.
SakuraKoi chapter 20 . 8/30/2014
I cant find the website to see if my stories are there.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/29/2014
I love the story and can not wait to read the rest. You have a grate mind to make a story like this. I will look for more of your stories after I read the rest of this one. From Dolphin
whitebuffalowmn chapter 20 . 8/28/2014
thank you for the information!
Mashkai30 chapter 19 . 8/21/2014
Is this the end?
Snickerdoodle10 chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
I really like your story though I am finding that your writing is a bit choppy. You will describe something and the as son as you are done you start describing it all over agin in a different way. You should just pick one.
Alie-yaoi chapter 19 . 6/17/2014
I like
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