|Reviews for a not so golden life|
| GryffindorGirlonfire chapter 19 . 3/2
This is great :) I would love to see Harry and Draco at Hogwarts with an insight to respect that pure families get and the order of everything like when you said only the Blacks were above the Malfoys. I would love to see them both going to Seeker but Draco letting him have it because he is a Black and then Harry saying they should share the role as long as he gets to play Gryffindor :)
| RavenLilyLuna chapter 19 . 3/1
| SakuraKoi chapter 19 . 2/16
| Dragonsrule18 chapter 19 . 2/12
Good chapter, but you forgot to put spaces between some of your words.
| KoreanMusicFan chapter 19 . 2/11
This is interesting! i can not wait for harry to start his new year at hogwarts. and Voldemort does not sound quiet so bad but i have to wonder at his reasoning about attacking the Potters.
Great chapter and story, Good luck with the rest of the story!
| Lorteck chapter 19 . 2/10
Tom has the right ideas.
Thanks for the update!
| dianadenisa chapter 19 . 2/10
great chapter! I like the name marvolo, but...I loooove tom more.!:)
have a good week!
| adenoide chapter 19 . 2/9
Marvolo has a good ideas about the futur.
| adenoide chapter 18 . 2/9
The verdict for these person are wonderful for the first time.
| Mukuro234 chapter 19 . 2/9
This is an awesome fic. Explains alot lol
| emthereble chapter 19 . 2/9
| Badbonita chapter 8 . 2/9
You're probably going to explain this in a later chapter but -
You have Harry get contacts at the beginning of this chapter and the end of chapter 2, you have his eyesight being repaired so that he didn't need glasses.
Different colors perhaps? Different as in the so-called 'cool' contact lenses? Clarify his reasoning please...
| autumngold chapter 19 . 2/9
Poor Harry, his life would have been so much better if Marvolo's laws had already been in existance when he was a child. Great update! Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
| Fandomtastic chapter 18 . 2/5
I see a growing trend in your writing that is also a big problem I have when writing. Many of my professors in writing have to me to show not tell. So for example, one will go "He blushes." you might want to change it up. "His eyes widened as his body temperature rise. A creeping red flow covered his cheeks and nose." Much more catching. It gives you an image. Yes, it is time consuming, but if you want to improve try it out. Unlike me who just post for the heck of it, ya kno? ;) Happy writing!
| Jannafrancine chapter 18 . 1/29
Great chapter. I have followed this from the beginning on AFF, and just found it on here and just finished reading the two newest chapters. I can't wait for more.