Reviews for A Lion's duty
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 8 . 3/22
Go Jaime!
Hypothetical Spiritual Entity chapter 35 . 3/5
I really liked the story so far. The characters are all very interesting. My favorite so far has been Joffrey. He still has traits easily recognizable from the twat from the canon we all know and love to hate, but this sincere desire to be a good ruler makes him much more sympathetic, even though there are still moments I can't help but go "Goddamit Joffrey!".
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 35 . 3/5
Nice story.
LittleGingerBird chapter 18 . 12/30/2014
I like the story quite a bit but I do have one criticism and that is that the narrative does not seem balanced. We have been getting a lot of Lannisters and I know they are your favor, but it would be nice to hear what the other side thinks and how they have changed and evolved. The way the story is now seems very black and white.
Selias chapter 31 . 11/29/2014
Weary means tired. Wary means cautious..
Selias chapter 30 . 11/29/2014
I've seen this typos throughout your story. When you "loose" something, you have released it. When you "lose" something, you have lost it.
what.if.indeed chapter 36 . 11/22/2014
This is one of the more original fanfictions I've read for A Song of Ice and Fire. I really enjoyed your characterization of Jaime especially, but Ned and Arya are pretty great too. I also like your exploration of Rhaenys. It's too bad this story is on hiatus. I encourage you to keep going with it, if only for yourself, as it's obvious you have put many hours into it already. I'd definitely enjoy reading more!
Panory Bro chapter 36 . 11/14/2014
It's a real shame about the hiatus. Just know you managed to get me to like Joffery, which is quite a feat. Hopefully the hiatus isn't indefinite.
Kate chapter 36 . 11/2/2014
Please, please, please, keep writing. I absolutly adored this story and it would mean so much to me if you could continue it.
Targ chapter 36 . 10/29/2014
No problems. Still willing to wait to see what happens
Antf chapter 36 . 10/29/2014
I'm sorry to hear that you think 'no one' wants to read this fic or the amount of interested people are not up to your expectations. It's a real shame that the haters got to you in the end. Hope to see you back...if at all, and thanks for everything up to now.
DarkTigerGod chapter 36 . 10/28/2014
Lo lamento, pero tengo que decirte esto en español, si lo entiendes o no, no es mi problema, si haces esto simplemente porque quieres que la gente te aprecie o lea lo que estas haciendo, entonces lo estas haciendo por razones equivocadas, el punto de escribir fanfiction es porque es divertido y te gusta hacerlo, que la gente opine sobre eso y lo lea, es un extra, deberías sentirte feliz de que alguien, por tan pocos que sean, lean tus historias, realmente es una lastima que dejes de hacer la historia, porque me gustaba mucho, yo soy una de las personas que esperaba pacientemente a que actualizaras pero parece que personas como yo no importamos, me has decepcionado totalmente, no critico tu historia, que me parece brillante, pero las razones por la que la estas escribiendo están totalmente equivocadas, es una lastima realmente, si te preocupa quien lea lo que escribes o no, escribe un libro, y no me molestes con tus complejos y necesidades emocionales, por favor, yo también soy una persona ocupada y no estoy en posición de gastar valiosos minutos de mi tiempo para leer tus historias si me vas a fastidiar con escusas.
lil'hawkeye3 chapter 36 . 10/28/2014
I'll miss you :(
Treebrooke chapter 36 . 10/28/2014
Nooooooooooooooooooooooo! Though if you need to you need to. However I will miss this story until it returns.
AryaxXxEragon chapter 36 . 10/28/2014
No! I though this story was safe. At least for a while as there where many who read and commented on this D:


I am not going to tell you what to do or not to, but I ain't giving up this story. I will wait for as long as it take to see this amazing story and plot finished.
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