Reviews for The Alfakyn
Guest chapter 2 . 2h
Nice. Using the ancient language from the inheritance series. Well played.
Robin Lynn Smith chapter 2 . 7/15
Soo. Yea. Not so subtle eragon reference? Lol.
ice-liger chapter 2 . 6/21
You took this from the inheritance series by Christopher poalini u should put in a disclaimer so u dont get sued
CookieForever chapter 2 . 6/13
You, you read Eragon Nice story for now.
Lupinum chapter 2 . 4/13
Is that a real language
Raven Salazar Potter-Black chapter 2 . 3/19
Sooo basically Inheritance cycle ancient language? Combined with some dwarves? And you do know brisingr is fire, not Istalri?
imaginz96 chapter 13 . 3/12
Is the second part out or going to be out soon?
Pyrane chapter 13 . 2/16
Thanks and see you around !

abbyissoawesome chapter 3 . 1/26
Are you using the language from Eragon (the inheritance cycle)?
Luna'sHorcrux chapter 13 . 11/30/2014
Sorry, I know this is annoying as f- and all, but when is the sequel gonna be here? I reeeeeeeeeally like your story
lovelydrarrylover chapter 8 . 10/26/2014
My goodness! Love you!
lovelydrarrylover chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
This is super duper DUPER good. I love it!
JulianneL chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
I'm not trying to flame or anything. But you should add a disclaimer or mark this as a crossover to Inheritance Cycle...or at least mention where you got certain inspirations. You even drew upon Lord of the Rings. I know this is fanfic but at least give credit where it's due. It's like you slapped together Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, and Eragon and then called it a Harry Potter fanfic.
NCIS FTW chapter 13 . 7/23/2014
I shall :)
Guest chapter 12 . 7/18/2014
I was enjoying this story but now it is just crap.
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