Reviews for Fall
Kelly75 chapter 5 . 7/10
This story is awesome. I've read a lot of your writing but for some reason never this one. It's a unique, intriguing plot but with everyone in character and full of emotion. Love the way you used the various points of view to really show how the characters are feeling and how they feel about each other. Favorite parts were your description of each person's magic and the way you show how Regina and Emma just simply, against all odds, fit together. Thanks for a great story!
Kelly75 chapter 3 . 7/9
Another fabulous chapter. My heart was literally pounding as I read. I especially liked the way you showed the story from various points of view with the overlap. Awesome writing!
Kelly75 chapter 2 . 7/9
I just finished the first two chapters of this and love this story. Beautiful words and can't wait to see where the story goes. I especially love how you describe Regina's magic. Can't wait to keep reading!
BookwormBudgie chapter 5 . 8/22/2015
Well-written, well-rounded, great characterisation, believable yet imaginative. What more can I say? A brilliant story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
PresentlyPast chapter 3 . 5/30/2015
""You" she says, and Regina thinks she hears something like relief in Emma's voice. "Me" she chuckles in response." - Love their interaction! Even in the swirling chaos of Emma's mind they alone can keep each other calm.
appleapplekiss chapter 5 . 12/26/2014
Though there was no SwanQueen moments, (I was really hoping, but like what she said, you didn't really promise that.) I am really glad I came across this wonderful story. It was the perfect Neverland story I've ever read! And I read a lot! :) I balled my eyes out at some parts.. I also like your Hook here-Yours is lovable compared to the real one. I wish there's a sequel to this. It'll be perfect, that's for sure! :)
CdB55 chapter 5 . 5/29/2014
Yay. I would have enjoyed more specific Swan Queen, but I don't believe you actually promised that. Nice story.
CdB55 chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
I'm enjoying this, and am glad I get to read when all the chapters are posted!
MiDushiNoSushi chapter 5 . 3/5/2014
Nooooo.. this can't be over.. :-( this was much better than the clusterfcuk of S3. (Sigh).. you did a superb job of laying a strong foundation for an eventual SwanQueen. I especially liked Henry having some magic too, but also how you touched up on Regina seeing Hell and being inches away from being flung into the belly of it. That was truly wicked! I can't wait to see the continuation of this story-verse.
MrsEleanorLovett chapter 5 . 1/22/2014
I love your Pre-SQ 'cause it's exactly how I see them. This story was specially good because we could understand everyone's POV
Sailor Pandabear chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
Nice
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 5 . 11/14/2013
They all basically saved each other. I appreciate the opportunity to bond as well.
Nota Bene chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
another beautiful piece of writing. I think this is my favorite so far.
electrictwizist chapter 5 . 10/1/2013
I'm so glad to read this story. I haven't decided yet whether or not I plan on actually watching S3 yet, but I really hope they do something like this on the show. Definitely not Grief, though! ;)
electrictwizist chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
I love ensemble stories, especially in shows that have such a huge cast that all have such interesting relationships that intertwine with each other. I'm also a very easy person to please - if you can write a character in such a way that makes me understand them, even if I don't agree, then I'll love it. So I love this entire story.
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