|Reviews for Fall|
| SamanthaGay chapter 5 . 10/13
Wow! This story was amazing. You had each character down so well, and I loved the many uses of magic and the second deal that Pan made with The Dark One. So many great twists. Brilliant writing.
Gee, I wish that you (and a few of the other talented Fanfic authors) had been on the OUAT writing team!
Thank you for all of your fabulous SQ stories. I will never give up the ship!
| Baku babe chapter 5 . 7/29
This was heartbreakingly beautiful, and very dark. Still beautiful tho.
| Kelly75 chapter 5 . 7/10/2016
This story is awesome. I've read a lot of your writing but for some reason never this one. It's a unique, intriguing plot but with everyone in character and full of emotion. Love the way you used the various points of view to really show how the characters are feeling and how they feel about each other. Favorite parts were your description of each person's magic and the way you show how Regina and Emma just simply, against all odds, fit together. Thanks for a great story!
| Kelly75 chapter 3 . 7/9/2016
Another fabulous chapter. My heart was literally pounding as I read. I especially liked the way you showed the story from various points of view with the overlap. Awesome writing!
| Kelly75 chapter 2 . 7/9/2016
I just finished the first two chapters of this and love this story. Beautiful words and can't wait to see where the story goes. I especially love how you describe Regina's magic. Can't wait to keep reading!
| BookwormBudgie chapter 5 . 8/22/2015
Well-written, well-rounded, great characterisation, believable yet imaginative. What more can I say? A brilliant story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| PresentlyPast chapter 3 . 5/30/2015
""You" she says, and Regina thinks she hears something like relief in Emma's voice. "Me" she chuckles in response." - Love their interaction! Even in the swirling chaos of Emma's mind they alone can keep each other calm.
| appleapplekiss chapter 5 . 12/26/2014
Though there was no SwanQueen moments, (I was really hoping, but like what she said, you didn't really promise that.) I am really glad I came across this wonderful story. It was the perfect Neverland story I've ever read! And I read a lot! :) I balled my eyes out at some parts.. I also like your Hook here-Yours is lovable compared to the real one. I wish there's a sequel to this. It'll be perfect, that's for sure! :)
| CdB55 chapter 5 . 5/29/2014
Yay. I would have enjoyed more specific Swan Queen, but I don't believe you actually promised that. Nice story.
| CdB55 chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
I'm enjoying this, and am glad I get to read when all the chapters are posted!
| MiDushiNoSushi chapter 5 . 3/5/2014
Nooooo.. this can't be over.. :-( this was much better than the clusterfcuk of S3. (Sigh).. you did a superb job of laying a strong foundation for an eventual SwanQueen. I especially liked Henry having some magic too, but also how you touched up on Regina seeing Hell and being inches away from being flung into the belly of it. That was truly wicked! I can't wait to see the continuation of this story-verse.
| MrsEleanorLovett chapter 5 . 1/22/2014
I love your Pre-SQ 'cause it's exactly how I see them. This story was specially good because we could understand everyone's POV
| tanithlipsky chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
| FaBbEr0oZ chapter 5 . 11/14/2013
They all basically saved each other. I appreciate the opportunity to bond as well.
| Nota Bene chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
another beautiful piece of writing. I think this is my favorite so far.