|Reviews for Up against the wall|
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
What a lovely time of year to read this! You know why? Because it's close to Halloween and that's when a local theater shows Rocky Horror Picture Show ("A sweet transsexual from Transvestite Transylvania...").
Mmm...perhaps Severus can show Harry what a Potions Master looks like in a black bustier and heels...
And it won't take seven days to make either one a man!
| thewolf74 chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
I'm happy that Harry had the courage to tell Severus whose underwear those were. The sex was hot.
| MA NOT ALLOWED chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Did you know the admins publicly announced the following concerning MA content?:
"Please note we would like to clarify the content policy we have in place since 2002. follows the Fiction Rating system ranging from Fiction K to Fiction M. Although Fiction Ratings goes up to Fiction MA, since 2002 has not allowed Fiction MA rated content which can contain adult/explicit content on the site. only accepts content in the Fiction K through Fiction M range. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA and has not been allowed on the site since 2002."
- Post by Admins on June 4th 2012, after deleting 50k MA related content stories
Despite what your feelings/thoughts/ideas etc. are about concerning MA content onsite, it is seriously not allowed here as per their guidelines, rules, and the announcement they made above back in 2012, which still applies to the present. By you posting it, this story(ies), you are breaking their 'No MA Content' rule and are disregarding the admins announcement too. As my username implies, 'MA [CONTENT IS] NOT ALLOWED', be of sexual and/or violence in nature.
Please remember that you agreed to the rules when you created a account here and uploaded any material here. By clicking the statement, 'Yes, I have read and agreed to the content guidelines', you have confirmed to the admins and everyone else that you have read and agreed to their rules and guidelines, this includes the consequences that may follow as mentioned in their rules/ToS.
To make your material compliant, you can do one of the following:
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o If you are unsure if this and/or your other material(s) has MA content in it, it is not bad to play it safe by removing/revising etc. the portion(s) and/or chapters you are concerned about. Although, if I am reviewing the material, it does mean that there is MA content in it. Know that by keeping it, your stories and possibly your account would be at risk. Sometimes the admins deletes accounts, be one rule breaking story on it or not.
Thank you for reading,
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| wandamarie chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
| tamashiyuki chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
| KimJungEel chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
This is one of my favorite stories to play erotic fan fic drinking games with!
Every time there's a cliche we take a drink and we all get SUUPPPER drunk.
Five stars, A ;)
| shadowsnarry chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
I knew it potter does look very sexy in girl's clothing! I write snarry fan fiction also and in one I have him wearing a skirt that's torn at the edges and a shirt vest thing and bunny ears ;)
| tainted-tash chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
That was... slightly weird... but great fun ;)
| RiceBallCrossIdolSnape chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Mahhhh! Sevvie baby and lingerie fetish!
| Tsyilna Llyria chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Oh how the mighty have fallen lol. Great story!
| charm13insomnia chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
| Rika100 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Love this one. :)
| RipleyHedwig chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Oh the simplicity and yet so absolutly perfect!
This was perfect!
I love the reactions and the vision. Very well written and an amazing read.
Thank you so very much!
| Bleu Tsuki chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Your story was sweet, sexy, and very tactfully done. I always enjoy the way you portray both characters so that they aren't too distorted. Thanks for writing this and I hope there's much more from you!
| Sheankelor chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
*smirks and shakes her head* I normally do not care for cross-dressing, but this had your name on it, and I trusted you. I am glad that I did. It was tastefully done.
I do love how Severus was so mad at the beginning, and rightfully so. But I also like how quickly it dissolved when he was confronted with the truth.
The way both of them controlled the situation was perfect.
I do hope your Severus enjoys his private show.