Reviews for Bitter Sugar
Aguapatomar chapter 13 . 9/9/2020
I must say this is an amazing job. I really hope eventually you will get the time and willing to continue. Even though if it takes another year or more to get an update, I would be glad to read it.
Melaiot chapter 1 . 5/26/2020
You’re simply the best, what ? Yes I already post a review but you deserve it ! You’re the best, keep it up please
Melaiot chapter 13 . 5/24/2020
Hope you are okay, good luck with your life, do as you please but I’d love if you may continue, because this is one of the best fanfic I’ve ever read with « my nights with you » this is what should be fanfictions, this is not upsetting and very well written.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/13/2020
Please, please, please update. this is amazing.
gabyrm77 chapter 1 . 2/8/2020
This continues to be among my favorite stories ever. Hope you find some time to continue. I have read all 12 chapters numerous times and enjoy it as the first.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/17/2019
i LOVE this so much. pb's epic speech, man! i hope u continue this story
zaisuro chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Im really a once in a very blue moon commenter (not unlike your update schedule). I kid, lol. Still I felt compelled to review it. I just stumbled on it and generally I scoff when authors state it will be a slow burn story but damn, you have executed this perfectly. Usually I see this designation and everyone is head ovet heels by chapter three and I am bored to tears. The world you created is refreshing and the plot and subplots are a delight to navigate. I hope you decide to update in the future.
xNobody chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
AHHHHH ! This is so good! Hoping for more!
battypotato chapter 1 . 7/9/2019
knock knock. just dropping by in hopes of an update.
shwEED chapter 13 . 7/3/2019
This fanfiction is an absolute gem. I love this plot— political drama, underlying intentions to overthrow power, organized schemes where the stakes are incredibly high, all odds against the protagonist(s)— it’s absolutely lovely. Oh yes, and my appreciation for this pairing is a definite contributor.

You write wonderfully, and you know how to keep readers on the edge of their seat. It’s difficult to find well-written works with this sort of heavier atmosphere as good as this, if there is at all.

In the author’s notes you had apologized multiple times for writing a “boring” chapter, but i assure you, informative sections are quite interesting, especially when giving insight on the world. I love working my brain to connect the different relations of kingdoms or just processing the customs of each one. You are so talented and incredibly creative—the well thought out political structures of everything is incredibly intriguing to me.

I hope you eventually get the motivation, time, inspiration, or other to continue this fic. It’s phenomenal, however, I do hope you take care of yourself as well! You are a priority. Anyway, it’s quite late for me right now, so I apologize if this review is convoluted. Thank you for this! Reading this is a wonderful experience.
Smattingly1 chapter 13 . 5/26/2019
Omg PLEASE finish this, I have to know what happens to Marceline! I love your work!
wordplay2007 chapter 13 . 4/30/2019
Just wanted to drop a note to tell you that this fic is very, very good. The story line is compelling, the characters are beautifully multidimensional, and your writing style is easy to read without being simple. In short, I really, really hope you come back to this someday because I was sorely disappointed to find myself at the end of Chapter 12 with no more to feed my intrigue.
Bram Watley chapter 13 . 3/19/2019
Love this. Please continue
genetic-depression chapter 13 . 1/30/2019
its 2019 but still re-reading this every month,, please update
Kurojistou chapter 13 . 1/22/2019
No! I hate this cliffhanger!
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