Reviews for Chime
Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Oy, you've done it again! Left me speechless with your words, really powerful stuff. WOW Dorothy, just wow.
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Beautiful, the poetry just suits the word and the episode so well.
Dizzo chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Powerful stuff, and very well composed - worthy of that amazing episode!
Nice work x
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Wow, and dark poetry too. Very well done, Dorothy -

The pain shines brightly, within my brother's eyes;
the clock loudly counts away the seconds to my demise.

that's beautiful.

I wanted to read your last one-shots but since real life didn't give me the time to watch all episodes I didn't dare. Hope to catch up soon. Hope that all's well with you too!

xx Kate
GaelicAngel chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Okay I seriously loved this and I liked what you did here in poem form. You don't see much of these sort of writing forms any more so this was awesome and seeing as I am obsessed with that episode it made my day.
Great work on this as always and can;t wait for the next thing you post!
mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Great job, it came together very smoothly, not forced at all. Best to you, mainegirlwrites
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Rhyming couplets, no less! I really liked the last line. Now I'm craving a season 3 re-watch.
Tifaching chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Oh, Dean! So, so sad.
AliRose chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Once again, awesome! Where do u find these challenges or prompts?