|Reviews for Revelation|
| notabum chapter 14 . 8/29/2013
I really need to catch up with this story. Lol I think I'm laughing way more then I should XD
| Darling-Stardusted-Traverser chapter 58 . 8/28/2013
Amazing work :D all caught up now. I hope to see an update soon, but I hope you're well most of all :D stay amazing.
| Darling-Stardusted-Traverser chapter 57 . 8/28/2013
Haha amazing work :D
| Darling-Stardusted-Traverser chapter 56 . 8/28/2013
DUN DUN DUN
I will go and most likely die
Glad to get caught up :D
| Willstrider chapter 41 . 8/14/2013
What an asshole
anyways great work
| Willstrider chapter 14 . 8/14/2013
Epic fail of a wrong end XD
| Darling-Stardusted-Traverser chapter 59 . 8/5/2013
Beautiful work I am sure :D I PROMISE I will edit soon. I'm a slacker, forgive me.
Have a good one :D and congrats on 180 (now 181) reviews :D
| Missanimecutie chapter 59 . 7/29/2013
Can I say this is amazing! I love the interaction and makes me feel like I am playing the real one. Also I think that the characters you made for the story are all very great characters and I am a fan of them all . I can tell you are creative and have a nice talent for this. But I think you need to slow down also and edit the story to make it more accurate because this is a little confusing. Like you at the beginning of chapter 59 Carmella died but she is still alive. I think you can change that and properly say that after she died she followed her friends as a ghost or change it to have her die. But this is just a suggestions. Another thing is I cant tell where some characters are due to them some how ending up in somewhere else. I believe if you have spare time, you should edit the story and then that can make it better and all of the readers can under stand it. I hope you like my review and thank you for writing this story. Keep up the awesome story!
| Theta Rex chapter 59 . 7/28/2013
Aaaand down they go. I don't know why Sachiko even bothers trying to dissuade people anymore.
Wonder what's waiting down in the basement this time around.
| Tomboy15103 chapter 59 . 7/28/2013
I knew it would be awesome! The incinerator scene! So different from the game! So original and cool! Can't wait for the next chapter! I loved that plot twist with them working for Sachiko.
| Theta Rex chapter 58 . 7/25/2013
Well, that was unexpected. Two choices, yet no Wrong End.
At least my assumptions have once again been tossed in the bin, and Usaji and Kano have, at long last, found each other. Now if we can somehow do the same for every other person trapped in this school right now, we're golden.
Easier said than done, right?
| Tomboy15103 chapter 58 . 7/25/2013
Woah. Both are good ends? Crazy.
| Tomboy15103 chapter 57 . 7/25/2013
That was kinda heartbreaking.
| Theta Rex chapter 56 . 7/21/2013
Well... seems Usaji finally decided to drop the Kizami Act and start making some actual progress. Here's hoping he finds her before something happens to her... not that anything could possibly happen to Kano. She's too sweet and innocent and...
...oh who am I kidding? This is Corpse Party. Anything could happen.
Ah yes, choice time again. Hmm... well, considering what happened to Miyaki in that Wrong End earlier, I wouldn't like to think Kano's having a go herself. That could be bad...
...in any case, I'm gonna with the former option. Fingers crossed...
| DestinyParadox20 chapter 56 . 7/21/2013
Welcome back! And go to the piano room!