Reviews for EO Challenge: Unwelcome Visitor
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
OMG! Totally wasn't expecting that ending, loved it! Hilarious!
AuntMo chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
A rat? After all they've been through? Lol
masondixon chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Sad Winchesters. Sad. We had a rat years ago. Tyrone was his name. He was adorable. He was white with red eyes- no greasy fur or bulbous midnight-black eyes! Poor Dean and Sam...and yet I am laughing my head off at the picture this puts in my mind!
Thank You.
mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Oh, geez! That little rat gave me the creeps - but you'd think the boys would be a bit more brave, haha! Nice job, darling - best, mainegirlswrites
Nana56 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
*snort* The little movie that runs in my head when I read was absolutely hilarious! Your words gave birth to quite the show. Put me in mind of a time there was a rat in our family room and I was hiding behind my son. LOL

Love it! :)
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
LOL, awesome!
SparklyLalala chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
"The rat had only popped out of its hole looking for dinner; he didn't expect a cabaret as well." I know right, you go out for dinner and the entertainment finds you whahahahahah LMAO
Tifaching chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Haha! The Sam and Dean show for rodents. I love it!
alena chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Cabaret Winchester chez Batcave- what more could anyone ask for!
- Loved the image of the boys' bravery in the face of such a terrible opponent...
Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Hahahahahaha! That last line made me totally crack up. :D
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Hehehe - that had me cackling like an old hag. Such a cute image - I'd even take the role of the rat to see it with my own eyes :-)

And funny how we have very similar titles - but very different stories.
Still - get better soon, sister in crime.

xx Kate
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Heehee...big ole if it had been a spider I could understand the fuss.
B x
emebalia chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Dinner with cabaret, others pay money for that.
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
haha I could absolutely picture this! Lovely write.