Reviews for A New Start
nice the fucking chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Where is the fucking lemons give naruto a 16 inche dick
BacoBoyX9 chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
Hello are you going to continue this awesome story?
TheRazgrizDragon chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
Great Story! Good Luck!
Metal Monstrosity chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Finally found a NarutoXKurotsuchi story
grillon.justing chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter
eniox27 chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
Very good naruto is how he should of been in terms of strength if he was serious. His personality and charisma are well defined. Dislike the sasuke clone redeem him or kill him of later perhaps. Pairing is devolving quite nicely
CackAvenger chapter 2 . 6/29/2013
I enjoyed the chapters you ahve up so far and i really enjoyed your revision of chapter one. I hope you update soon to continue on with the story. Keep up the good work
meowy1986 chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
good story so far..only thing i dislike is how happy go lucky retard naruto is hes like he was in the beginning of the anime/manga..tbh if naruto had parents i dotn think he would be the immature loud mouth retarded brat he was in canon
gentlemankitsune chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
This is a great story premise, with quality writing.
I hope you continue it
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Cool story so far
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Chapter good ... Interesting.

Roshi and Han, will be able to detect that Naruto has the Kyuubi ... if they approach the Naruto.
Harry Morgan Le Fay chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Good.
WindStylez chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Very nice chapter. Really enjoyed the development in this chapter and I also enjoyed reading that naruto is close to the Tsuchikage.
However, the scene with Naruto's mom saying that Naruto was adopted was rather...lax. I suppose.

But, Will naruto find out about his heritage at the chunk exams? Maybe he could excel in his fuinjutsu studies after finding out who his real parent are and get the flying thunder god technique. (Obviously quite a bit later) but they're fifteen, maybe at 18

Very nice chapter, maybe revise some spelling mistakes and if you could make the chapters even longer, it would be very appreciated.

Overall; 9/10 for this chapter :)
WindStylez chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Nice start... Maybe could include some backstory, ie. the Kumo nin getting into Konoha etc...

Other than that;
8/10 for first chapter. Throughly enjoyed reading.
senpen banka chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Cool story! When will they find out that Naruto is the Kyuubi jinchuuriki?
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