Reviews for Time for a Change
Bookworm Gal chapter 8 . 12/30/2013
A rather interesting and entertaining story. Nice work.
ryu238 chapter 8 . 11/21/2013
I demand a sequel!
Fairyhaven13 chapter 8 . 11/16/2013
Very well done! And if you were worried about your character being a Mary Sue before, I'd say you did a good job of making her more original now. Although the name will take some getting used to, since it's not quite based on the normal pattern for villain names. It sounds more like a foreign alien or princess's name. What about... Charfingers? No, that sounds dumb, like burnt chicken fingers... I got nothing. Oh well.
James Birdsong chapter 8 . 9/16/2013
Good six chapters.
nightmaster000 chapter 8 . 7/25/2013
Great story. I look forward to the sequel.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 8 . 7/21/2013
Very good one here.

I think Darkwing would have still escaped, but that would be a very short fic then.

Keep the good writing.
MechaKat chapter 8 . 7/21/2013
Another nice chapter and a wonderful set up for the sequel! I like the way you got rid of darkwing and I can already see how bad things are going to turn out lol. I'm all for mindless terror and destruction. Keep up the good work!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
Another good update. Pretty good job with all the characters.

Keep the good writing.
MechaKat chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I have to admit, I actually like your oc. She has faults and hangups like everyone else, not something easy to find in fanfiction. I especially like her interactions with the four, it's pretty believable. Though I have to ask, would you be planning on making this a series or is Megs just your fav?
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 6 . 6/27/2013
Very cool one. And nice job with the fight scenes.

Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 5 . 6/20/2013
Very good chapter here. Cool scenes all the way.

Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
As usual, pretty cool stuff here.

Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 6/6/2013
Great chapter, and nice way to introduce Luminas.

Keep the good writing.
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
Oh excellent two chapters. Excellent.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
Great story here. Nice job with all the characters and cool action scenes.

Keep the good writing.
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