Reviews for Namigakure
bleach god chapter 9 . 8/22
Yes great story pls update at least till the exam arc
Chillman22 chapter 2 . 8/21
I guess Naruto and Haku are a bit like Goku and Chi-chi, only slight difference. watch?vb6yBYoY0yNA
ElementalMaster16 chapter 10 . 8/11
very cool fic so far! i love the pairing too :) though i thought koyuki and shion were in as well from when you meantioned them. i'm not a really big fan of all the pregnancies so soon, but i can get behind it.

Captain Moroni chapter 6 . 7/31
Umm I'd like to point out that it's not genetics that make a mother. It's the act of giving birth to someone that makes them a mother. Genetics only come in when you're trying to find a date. I.e. You don't date your sister because that's disgusting, inbreeding and not actually healthy for the children. Good story though.
Mugetsu Ichigo323 chapter 1 . 7/22
SSJ Guyver1... you have no idea how much I agree with you. I hate it when a MC hates a character for their entire lives, and then forgives them after a single apology. Also, nowadays child sex is encouraged in Fanfiction and pedophilia is a must have for a successful Naruto story.
ztron24 chapter 10 . 7/15
Great story so far hope next chapters just as good
Simon D. Uzumaki chapter 10 . 7/10
have to say, it is one of the best dbz cross overs ive seen, now that the building of the clan is settled with them all being pregnant, he can go onto next faze to get konoha into his sights, and the up coming chunnin examination
SSJ Guyver1 chapter 10 . 6/25
I have to admit, you had a pretty decent story. It was rushed, of course, but I was liking where it was heading in all honesty. However,... you went from a good story, from chapters one through six, to a twelve year old wanting porn in chapters seven through 10. I can take a little Lemon every now and then, when it's written well and includes reasons behind it. Yours is really baseless sex. You try to play it off as relationship building, but honestly, let's call it what it is. F#$%ing. Then the logic behind Kushina joining was,... WTF are you smoking; out there. He went from despising his mother, to giving her a shot as nothing more than an acquaintance, to having sex with her in three chapters.

All this, without any real backstory or reason for it. So it makes it seem like "I want it like this, so F my previous story". Just from reading this, I can tell your into MILF's, as well as having a somewhat Oedipus complex.

Let us not forget the fact that Mikoto apparently loved Naruto when he was still in Konoha,... when he was a CHILD. Also, rounding this pretty little package up, you stated that Goku would oversee Naruto's training until he was fifteen. I was rather shocked that Goku was a 'witness' for Naruto's vows to Mikoto,... meaning that Naruto isn't even fifteen and you have him having sex with all these women.

This became a decent story in which I wanted to see how it ended,... to I really don't believe you have a true plot, that you just had a beginning in order to write porn.

Sorry for the rant,... but this is just my opinion. Good luck.
Reaver216 chapter 10 . 6/18
great story but my only problem is the incest between naruto and his mom i just skipped that part and i also don't see why or how his dad and sister can call him a bastard since his mom and dad where married when they where born but i do understand sorta also in my opinion there is to much feeler and not enough action and i don't mean sexual action besides im a yaoi fan myself so i would really rather a kyuubi x naruto but i'm not trying to tell you to change this to a yaoi story but if you do, do a yaoi story you now know what i like but this is still a great story even with the flaws
kazearashika chapter 7 . 6/9
I wanted to laugh as minato drifted to insanity
voiddragon chapter 10 . 6/7
I loved this story and I really can't wait for the next chapter. I have to admit that I was abit put off Kushina/Naruto and again by Tsunade/Naruto... But I got over the fact that they are "family"
nicholas.souddress chapter 10 . 6/5
I'm in love with this story and I can't wait for the next chapter, I have to go to work in 2 minutes but after work I'm wanting to know what is the estimated wait time for a new chapter.
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 10 . 6/5
Awesome story I hope you continue
firetemplar415 chapter 10 . 6/4
This is quite the quaint story. Although the plot is still a bit thin the story overall has good merits that make it really good.
And for those reasons I can't wait for new chapters :)
Guest chapter 10 . 6/2
This is a really great story please continue it
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