Reviews for FateZero: Revolution of Dice
xxxrae97xxx chapter 20 . 2/26
Holy fuck this was amazing. Top shit right here. well done
SageofAges729 chapter 8 . 6/4/2014
So, this has been fun...right up until you have Caster kidnap Rin. And the implications you have left in your Author's Note leaves me quite squicked out. She's a KID. A YOUNG kid at that. That's just...Lelouch can get bad, but I REALLY doubt he'd sink that low. So, sorry to say, I'm leaving this story here at chapter 8. I just can't keep reading with the idea that a child is being...urgh. Just no.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/4/2014
Hahahaahah
this chapter was really funny too bad there were not
more like this its fun good job ;)
Amusebeard chapter 20 . 12/15/2013
Clap Clap! Amazing story, I loved it, especially because it was a while that I was searching for a story with Lelouch in the Holy Grail War. Again, great story.
mr I hate znt nobles kill em chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
Response to the make. What's gonna happen to the value of gold
Random Reviewer chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
I must say I am completely disappointed that Caster survived. It was, beyond doubt, the biggest let down of the entire story. He basically pulled a karma Houdini and got away with all that shit he did. I'm honestly not sure I'll be able to read through a sequel, if you make one, featuring that guy.
coronadomontes chapter 20 . 10/5/2013
este capitulo final fue Maravilloso, totalmente genial , destruiste el canon, dandonos una muy original y magnifica historia, me alegra que quieras hacer la continuacion, en cuanto a las preguntas
1¿Que paso con los 2 shiro (el guardian contador y el niño)?
2 ¿El asesino de magos podra ver a su hija?
3¿Los vanidosos e idiotas magos de la torre del relog, cazaran a Zero?
4 ¿Que sera del clan de gusanos sin Zouken para manipularlo? tiene toneladas de conocimiento majico, perdieron a su patriarca, dudo mucho que se queden de brasos cruzados
¿Es muy pronto para pedir que en la siguiente guerra salgan 28 sirvientes (canon y de otros animes juntos) y que ademas de las 7 clases tipicas, incluyas a avanger, salvador y ruler?
5¿ Que fanfic me recomiendas leer, mientras te inspiras para hacer la continuacion?
OBSERVER01 chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
wow!just wow!
ultima-owner chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
that was a great finale
Zexs chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
Damn if Lelouch all of his Knightmare of Nunnally abilities on top of his normal ones you might need Gilgamesh just to stop him. He would dance circles around Saber and any of the other canon servents.
Raximus chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
Epic ending.
Gojira Maniac chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
Congratulations on finishing the story and on how you finished it.

Now there is something that is bothering me, in chapter 15 you stated that if Lelouch summoned Nunnally, he would have access to a key that would make it so that they wouldn't need to make any F.L.E.I.J.A.'s, but in the next chapter when the F.L.E.I.J.A. is finally fired, Schneizel is holding a key; did they make a second key at some point to operate them or were there two keys from the beginning, if so why did Schnneizel make it a point to remind Lelouch about Nunnally's?
Impstar chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
Wow, Zero has sunk to new depths. Does he not realize that he's setting himself up to be Earth's destroyer? Will he really step down once the grail is destroyed, or will he continue to destroy in the name of peace until there is nothing left?

By the way, can he retrieve allies from his "Call of Loyalty" when they're killed? It'd be a nice touch if they slowly over time came back. Not that that is at all relevant unless you do a sequel.
Jouaint chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
Pretty good ending.
Wraith Kone chapter 20 . 10/4/2013
... What happened to Lelouch and Kallen afterwards?

I'm somewhat confused and elated at the ending.
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