Reviews for Mother and cub
MattexIsAsRealAsTilena chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
It's a good story, but I don't think you got the characters that well, River wouldn't do wjat she was told at all. Also, more detail would be nice.
anthony hudson chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
it was a great story, however it should have had more describeing details for the setting.