Reviews for Sixteen Years
randomreader chapter 32 . 3/15
Great story.
I really hope you continue this.
Dastardly Dragon chapter 32 . 3/3
This was such a fantastic story, right up to the very end where you left me hanging. You're so close to the end. Put me out of my misery and finish the story. I'm begging you.
annagardner11 chapter 32 . 2/10
Update soon
Iman chapter 32 . 1/10
dang ... this is the best fanfic ive ever read. normally I dont review but this deserved one keep updating
TheBigOne chapter 16 . 8/29/2014
I am surprised it wasn't Loch Lomond he sang to be true to Scottish heritage or Scotland The Brave.
TheBigOne chapter 10 . 8/26/2014
Awe come on! This was better with Draco at least being on a mutual friendship. Dammit! *Gets ready to fire a hexing curse at the author*
TheBigOne chapter 9 . 8/26/2014
What the hell is wrong with Griffindoors or whatever the hell they are called? It's like they have an ego problem and I doubt it's because of the name or house pride.

I bet the they have some kind of a genetic DNA disorder that goes way back when so I guess no matter what house they are in they will be mean and heartless if they feel threatened in the slightest like shooting at Harry while his back was turned. Disgraceful!

I think Draco was being too kind and should've summoned one of those Death Eater thingies at Ryan to teach him a lesson about who not to mess with.
TheBigOne chapter 6 . 8/25/2014
I wonder if the engineers panicked at all while driving the train and considered applying the air brakes to emergency?
THeBigOne chapter 3 . 8/25/2014
Is it just me or does it sound like Dumbledor is like Oh Bama whatever it takes to achive goals. Screw COngress! Let's make a communist nation and encourage everybody to be on welfare instead of having jobs or skills!
THeBigOne chapter 3 . 8/25/2014
BLoody hell! How did Harry eat waffles on his motorbike? The paragraph states that little did he know the dark lord was following him then switched over to having waffles making it look like he is eating while driving.

Man he is good but can you clarify please how he does it?
TheBIgONe chapter 2 . 8/25/2014
Hate to break it to you but the British police wouldn't let that chase go so easily. It's nice to assume Harry would be able to throw off the Headmaster but he still has ground police to deal with coming in from all sides. He (Harry) would have to take extremely rural country roads *if you can even call them roads more like dirt paths* to evade the coming backup.

One tool they have that the Wizards don't is a wonderful invention called the CB Radio which they can communicate and organized a TPAC (Tatical Pursuit and Containment) which may be conceieved by either rolling roadblock or the Stinger (stop sticks in American language) to puncture tires/tyres.

Then they have the helicopter with FLIR (Forward Looking INfrared) camera and a giant spotlight equal to over 1,000 candle power turning night into day.

While the police may not know magic they have equally useful tools up their sleeves.

OH and did I mention the Automatic Number Plate Reader? (ANPR) that scans all the vehicles they pass for any hits on warrants/insurance evaders?

I am not using my own keyboard adn the one I am using is some of the keys don't work properly.
Hpreader27 chapter 6 . 7/29/2014
Well that's no fair, Kingsley can use electro ball but Harry can't use flamethrower
Mysterious.girl chapter 32 . 7/19/2014
Ok:
1) I love this so much! Please please please update as soon as humanly possible, I'm so desperate to read more!

2)HOW COULD YOU KILL HIM? I was so close to tears. :'(

3) I love your writing style

4) I adore the Ron/Padma thing that's going on ;)

5) I don't normally like Dumbledore bashing but the way you've written him makes him into a right bastard and believably so, well done!

Please keep up the amazing writing :) xxx
triggbc chapter 32 . 7/2/2014
I read the story again while waiting for next chapter. I wish Neville hadn't died. Anyway, update soon please.
moonstone88 chapter 32 . 7/1/2014
Took me a while to get all caught up with this story but I'm glad I did. I love everything you have here and can't wait to read more. Really looking forward to your next update, keep up the great work.
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