Reviews for Troika
celajwhitney chapter 14 . 4/24
what the hell does Carlisle want from her? she's made it more than obvious that she wasn't want anything to do with the Cullens ever again.
Saralynnb chapter 65 . 12/20/2020
This is am absolutely delightful story with very original ideas .i enjoyed this vey much! Thanks for sharing.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 13 . 7/26/2020
She comes across as being permanently, emotionally and intellectually 17 with no hope of ever growing up.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 11 . 7/26/2020
You need a hell of a lot more than beer if you're going to be subjected to a chick flick. They are totally disgusting!
chellekathrynnn chapter 20 . 7/26/2020
Man why you gotta kill off Esme and alice?!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 8 . 7/26/2020
Definitely entertaining
chellekathrynnn chapter 9 . 7/26/2020
Carlisle?! Not Edward?!
winterhorses chapter 43 . 7/14/2020
Stupid c*ckblocking Edward! Bella deserves a little lovin’ from someone who knows what he’s doing...
winterhorses chapter 38 . 7/14/2020
Carlisle’s so much better than Edward in every way, but since Bella’s crazy enough to want Edward instead, *I’ll* gladly take the Dreamy Doctor! Lol.
clickpic chapter 65 . 6/10/2020
Absolutely loved this story! Thank you for writing it.
Mari Wollsch chapter 65 . 5/29/2020
super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Czarina chapter 31 . 10/20/2019
You're killing me! This is such a funny, great story. You've nailed the characters to a T.
Czarina chapter 17 . 10/20/2019
This is such a fabulous story. The "A Lots" makes me howl with laughter every time I see the phrase.
Kksmum chapter 64 . 9/18/2019
Great tale. Have read it before. Loved it all over again.
crystal the optimist chapter 15 . 5/2/2019
I don't know if you still read these, but I wanted to say thank you for writing these stories and leaving them on fanfiction for others to enjoy.

I love how real 'your' characters feel. My main complaint with these sorts of stories is that the romance feels like the only thing that matters in the characters' lives. I love that in this story so far - and especially in your Garret/Bella story - the romance is just one piece of the personal growth puzzle. It's often not outrageously complicated, and ties into a larger narrative of love, loss, forgiveness, empathy, etc.

In this story, Bella is not my favorite character BUT that makes it better than 99% of what I've read on this site. She has enough character for me to decide I don't like her much, and that's vital. No one is a caricature, Mary Sue, or irredeemably evil. They seem so real.

I can't wait to read more of your stories. I also refuse to believe you are not publishing original works by now. If you see this, please let me know your (pen?) name so I can buy some of your books. I'd love to have them on my shelf.

Thank you for sharing.

All the best,
Crystal
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