Reviews for Young & Beautiful
lexicon63738 chapter 6 . 3/26
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story soon I love it
Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2014
'mind if i slytherin?' *waggles eyebrows* PRICELESS!
DarkLover4Life chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Okay Dahling, I have something to say here, not going to flame. Don't worry, it's just that from the first chapter it needs more detail. More time spaces so to speak. The plot is interesting, Harry/Hermione/Tom, is new and different. But intriguing, this could be come a great story if your writing wasn't bunched together. I've only read the first chapter and it feels rushed. Like wouldn't it take Riddle more than a day to get thinking about Hermione? It feels rushed, I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels that way. Try to, space it out more. I'll continue reading to find out what happens next.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/29/2014
Cant wait for next chapter! _:)))
As mad as one can get chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
The formula seems enticing enough but apart from that the events are too rushed, the surrounding aren't more than mentioned and the interaction between the characters are everything but real. It could become a good fic, but it needs a lot of work.
Lorna Potter chapter 6 . 10/26/2014
Please dont go 10 months before updating again. I love this story so much. Great chapter :) x
Lalina92 chapter 6 . 10/23/2014
Poor Hermione, Tom is an asshole & I hope he's killed soon
geetac chapter 6 . 10/23/2014
I like the chapter.
purple sky always chapter 5 . 8/9/2014
Wonder what Tom will try next
yalisa411 chapter 5 . 8/2/2014
I love it! Please update quickly!,
Guest chapter 5 . 6/3/2014
Damn...Tom, you idiot. Nice story, I hope you update soon
LunaEtSidera chapter 5 . 5/15/2014
Ooooh, bad Tom! Haha, I love this story so far! Update soon!
moonyloony chapter 5 . 3/19/2014
really good story, i hope you keep it going with it.
TomRon chapter 4 . 2/5/2014
They're pretty much interchangable at this point...
Shakespeare girl chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
Such interesting development of Hermione. Stay away from passive voice in beginning. Nice work.
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