|Reviews for They Would If They Could|
| Littwink chapter 1 . 8/8
Sound like the start of a beautiful (albeit unhealthy) relationship.
| Rozamunda chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
You're not the only one who grins at that point ;)
I like it. Really. A lot. I would write more, maybe actually is WHAT I like, but I simply Don't know. I just know I like it :D
By the way, I've always wondered why people always think that in homosexual relationships (two people of the same gender, for goodness sake!) one in a "girl" and one is a "guy". Ridiculous!
| GothicDebby chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
like this ;)
| ZarosianElf chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
I'm intrigued. And that makes me happy and annoyed, because it's a nice drabble but I'm not going to find out what happens. Regardless, I like it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
haha the end is excellent!
| EmilyTane chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Awesome! I would love to read more
| Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I really liked this. It was short, but I enjoyed it. I tend not to read HarryTom fics (actually, I tend not to read any Harry-centric romances) but I thought you wrote this really well.
I liked how you kind of started it and ended it with the same sentence. That kind of thing is really effective, and I really enjoy little things like that.
Spelling and grammar were as fine as could be, and I guess the only (minor) thing I'd point out is I wish it was longer, but that's just me.
Well done on this. It was enjoyable and interesting.