|Reviews for The beginning|
| ficwriterjet chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Aw, very cute. :) I liked seeing it from Achilles point of view. I find it believable that someone who isn't afraid of battle could be terrified of trying to comfort a grieving child. I thought it was great that Achilles seemed to know instinctually how to help Patroclus. :)
| HaloFin17 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Aw, that was super sweet! Thanks for sharing it with me :-) I felt that Achilles' doubts and insecurities at the beginning were very accurate and relateable, but then so was the realization later that he and Patroclus both filled each other's needs perfectly at this point in time. I could tell you gave it a lot of thought, and good job handling all the emotions!
| Little Leaf of the Redwoods chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Very sweet, fluffy chapter. I love that you put a lot of thought into how each character was feeling.
| TheStoryDreamer chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
It was great! It even showed a side of Achilles that most see past in the movie. Great job!
| Spiritblaze chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Oh, what an adorably fluffy little oneshot! You captured both characters so wonderfully, and I loved how you had Achilles so nervous at the thought of taking care of a child. I also loved how they had that instant connection and bonding. So cute! :)
I thought the line about Achilles being a horrible cook was funny; I giggled. xD And the ending was super-cute!