|Reviews for First Stream of Sunlight|
| kmc995 chapter 1 . 2/4
I LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAY TOKIYA AND OTOYA I NEED MOAR thank you goodnight
| Tokittoki chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Just the kind of humour I enjoy reading! LOL… Tokiya’s face! I could imagine his panicked expression hahahaha! You are foxy, for a second I thought Tokiya was sensing Otoya’s cock. LOOOL And the “Hehe, well… It's just… it was my first time sleeping with Tokiya.” part was just so hilarious.
Only one pointer though: you shouldn’t add an A/N in the middle of the story. Those should only be used in the beginning or at the end.