Reviews for The Half-Blood Games
DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 1 . 4/11
I LOVE HOW PEOPLE CAN READ AND PAY ATTENTION TO EVERY LITTLE DETAIL ON THE SUBMISSION FORM BUT NOT THE EXPLICITLY, STUPIDLY CLEAR AS CRYSTAL STATEMENT IN MY SUMMARY SAYING "DISCONTINUED". IT'S PRACTICALLY SCREAMING AT YOU, AND DECORATED IN TACKY FLASHING NEON LIGHTS.
YEAH. I CAN SEE THAT YOU READ MY CHAPTER TWO AUTHOR'S NOTE. YOU PAID ATTENTION TO WHO SUBMITTED YET AND WHO DIDN'T. YEAH I SEE YOU. BUT YA DIDN'T READ THE AUTHORS NOTE SAYING HEY I AIN'T DOIN THIS ANYMORE. AND NOT THE DATE SAYING HEY I HAVEN'T UPDATED FOR LIKE 2 YEARS. AND THE THING IN MY PROFILE SAYING WHAT THE ACTUAL ***HECK*** WAS THAT THING. AND ALSO, THE THING SAYING NO MORE SEQUELS. OR CONTINUING DISCONTINUED STORIES. BECAUSE YOU GUYS ARE HONESTLY GETTING ON MY FREAKING NERVES.
SOMETIMES. YOU GUYS. ARE HORRIBLE.
Gigigirl1908 chapter 1 . 4/11
Name: Layla Prince
Gender: Girl
Age: 13
Date of Birth: 19 August
Olympian Parent: Hestia
Mortal Parent: Allen Prince
Mortal Parent's History: Met Hestia while on vacation. Died 7 years after Layla was born.
District: 9
Personality: Often shy and quiet but mess with her family then you better run for it. People mistake her for being fragile but she is very strong willed.
History: Once her father died, she went to live with her Aunt Kathlyn.
Token: A small golden flame on a bracelet that turns into a dagger.
Choice Weapon: Her bracelet dagger.
Hair colour/style/lenght: She has light orange hair that comes down to her lower back. It is straight with tiny curls down the bottom that flicker red like flames. Her bangs sweep over her right eye.
Eye colour: the same orange as her hair.
Height: 4"9
Weight: 31kgs (sorry, from Australia. Don't know pounds.)
Abilities/strengths/powers: She has the power of fire. She can make anyone feel warmth inside them. Can stop arguments with just a couple of statements.
Weaknesses/flaws: Doesn't want to hurt people unless they've done something very horrible to her family. Will sacrifice herself for loved ones.
Favourite colour: Most people would think it to be orange but it's actually green.
Favourite food: Roast Chicken
Casual appearance: any colour (but black) hoodie with brown leggings. Her favourite orange boots finish the look.
Formal appearance: An ankle lenght poofy dress. The top part is sleeveless and orange and bottom half is red and yellow like flames.
Hobbies: Singing, hanging with friends
Other: She has a secret friendship with a girl from District 7.
PerseusJFAN1016 chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
Your so modest. I am sure you would have done a fantastic job. :)
TeamLeo4Life chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Name Charity Rose

Gender girl

Age (12-18) 18

Date of Birth 10 09 1995

Olympian Parent Poseidon or Zeus

Mortal Parent Maria Rose

Mortal Parent's history (i.e. are they still alive? How did they meet _?) mom is dead. She married dad at 17, went into the hunger games at 18. She died in the games. My dad has taken care of me since, but is rarely with me now that I'm 18.

District # (just for confirmation so I'm not confused and you aren't disgruntled)Poseidon 4

Personality shy but is very tough

History she has had to hunt her whole life, she fell in love with a boy named Nico di Angelo

Token (and yes you can have hidden weapons inside tokens _) idk what tokens are.

Choice weapon(s) a bow and arrow, sometimes a sword. Sword is a click pen, named illuminus.

Hair color/style/length long wavy dirty blonde hair

Eye color gray-blue

Height average size

Weight average weight

Abilities/strengths/powers everything percy/Jason could do (depending on who's my father, Poseidon or Zeus, I choose Poseidon first though)

Weaknesses/fatal flaws her love for nico.

Allies with particular district? (I'll think up most of these, but if you want to specify, go ahead)

Favorite color lime green

Favorite food though she hasn't had much, her favorite is strawberries

Casual apparel any color t-shirt with denim shorts

Formal apparel (for the reapings and that fun stuff) a blue (or gray) dress that sparkles with my hair up in a french braid and slight make up.

Hobbies drawing
if-i-could-live-4ever chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
Name Carnation

Gender Female

Age 12

Date of Birth May 5

Olympian Parent Demeter

Mortal Parent Deren Sparter

Mortal Parent's history is dead, died in fatal tracker jacker attack. Met Demeter while harvesting wheat

District # 11

Personality strong, protective, secretive, independent, shy, stressed, scared

History was seven when father died, lived in the wheat fields because she felt safe there. She was a watcher; she stayed in the trees and raised the signal when it was time to stop work

Token a locket with a piece of grain inside of a diamond. Can turn into a double edged dagger by opening it

Choice weapon(s) her locket/dagger and a scythe

Hair color/style/length wood brown, in high braided pigtails, long and curly

Eye color sky blue

Height 4'11''

Weight 98

Abilities/strengths/powers great climber, great balance and can make any plant grow anywhere

Weaknesses/fatal flaws her fatal flaw is independence; she thinks she can do everything by herself, but sometimes she needs help. Not good at wrestling.

Favorite color gold

Favorite food raspberries

Casual apparel navy jacket, white tee and tight black pants, mud stained boots

Formal apparel overalls with a skirt instead of pants, nice black shoes

Hobbies singing, gardening, tinkering

BTW, love your story you are a great writer and your ideas are amazing. Im too busy to adopt your story, but I would love to
Thalia-Longworth chapter 3 . 6/13/2013
I'll continue if you want me to
Beauty.Is.Strange chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
Haha, you suck, tricking us like that! Oh well I'll still read it!
DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
Just submitted "Chapter 1"... you have no idea how much I'm laughing right now :P

I'm so sorry, dear readers. But I just couldn't resist. Please listen to the stupid AN and I wouldn't have to take these drastic measures.
Writingnerd291 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Jay Silverstar
Female, 16, hunter if Artemis, allies with Apollo's kids (7) and boy from 4. Mom- Karen Miller, regular woman that takes care of her family Dad- Joshua Silverstar, works in the district to feed the family. Favorite color- turquoise Height- 5 6 weight- 117 pounds hobby- sports, hunting, running

Argues with boy from 7. Uses bow and arrow. Token- silver cresent moon clip that turns into a bow or knife, dependinf on her mood. Personality- serious, sarcastic when annoyed or angry, patie t when hunting, but not with people. Thinks poorly of boys, always helping girls
Birthday- July 7th
District- 10
Hair- light brown, to mid back
Eyes- emerald green
Half-Blood 7 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Name Nathan Tan

Gender Male

Age (12-18) 14

Date of Birth October 11 (matters what year it is) on Friday

Olympian Parent Zeus

Mortal Parent Jamie Tan

Mortal Parent's history (i.e. are they still alive? How did they meet _?) Zeus and Jamie meet at a party. It was love it for site. They started dated Zeus told her what he is then later Nathan was born then Zeus had to leave when Nathan was 9 months old.

District # (just for confirmation so I'm not confused and you aren't disgruntled) 1

Personality Shy, keeps to himself

History Nathan's dad left when he 9 months old. He and his mom lived in district 1. They did have a lot of money. He only had 1 friend and always got picked on. He some times played basket ball by him self and he read books sometimes. He also meet his dad when he was 12.

Token (and yes you can have hidden weapons inside tokens _) a golden watch that turns in to a shield.

Choice weapon(s) bronze sword, shield, spear.

Hair color/style/length short brown hair

Eye colour stormy blue

Height author can pick

Weight author can pick

Abilities/strengths/powers can control wind so he can fly and somon lightning. Really fast runner. Can throw a spear really far.

Weaknesses/fatal flaws Afraid of drowning in water. Afraid of giving up.

Allies with particular district? (I'll think up most of these, but if you want to specify, go ahead)
4 and 12
Favorite colour orange

Favorite food chocolate chip cookies

Casual apparel t-shirt, jeans, shorts

Formal apparel (for the reapings and that fun stuff) dress pants, shirt, and a tie

Hobbies reading, basket ball

( post soon -¿-)
EshMsh chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
For Allies with particular district I'll add district 5 to my oc. Ps hope u post soon!
EshMsh chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Name: Adam Hanze

Gender: Male

Age (12-18): 16

Date of Birth: August,18 (matters what the year is) on a Tuesday

Olympian Parent: Poseidon

Mortal Parent: Mary Hanze

Mortal Parent's history (i.e. are they still alive? How did they meet _?): they met when Mary was on the beach. They start dating then he left before Adam was born and he's been wondering who his dad was until he was 12.

District # (just for confirmation so I'm not confused and you aren't disgruntled): 4

Personality: calm, cool, funny, easy to get along with, and friendly

History: ADHD, deslexic, grown up in distric 4, never knew his dad until he was 12. He and his mom lived in a small house near the water. He went fishing and hunting were a little low on money. He had a some friends which he hung out with a lot while fishing and school.

Token (and yes you can have hidden weapons inside tokens _): coin- heads Triton and tails bronze sword( usually lands on tails in his hand

Choice weapon(s): triton, shield, and sword

Hair color/style/length: jet black hair, tall

Eye color: Sea Green

Height: author can pick just has to be tall

Weight: author can pick

Abilities/strengths/powers: can control water, use it to heal, or use it as a weapon. Strong, good with a triton, sword and shield.

Weaknesses/fatal flaws: having to give up and losing his friends

Allies with particular district? (I'll think up most of these, but if you want to specify, go ahead): District 1 and 12
Favorite color: Blue

Favorite food: blue berrie pie

Casual apparel: Jeans, leather jacket, t-shirt, shorts,

Formal apparel (for the reapings and that fun stuff): jeans, white dress shirt

Hobbies: fishing sword/triton fighting and swimming

Other (mainly just stuff I forgot and you didn't): There is no other stuff
Nikki daughter of Apollo chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Name: Eva Wlison

Gender: Female

Age (12-18): 13

Date of Birth: 7- 6- (matters what the year is)

Olympian Parent: Apollo

Mortal Parent: Christina Wilson

Mortal Parent's history (i.e. are they still alive? How did they meet _?): Meet when Christina was singing out by the woods. They fell in love and then Eva came. Christina tried to raise Eva but she went mad and dissapaered in the woods forever.

District # (just for confirmation so I'm not confused and you aren't disgruntled): 7

Personality: Quiet, shy, keeps to herself, trys to be happy for everyone else but when she's alone she never smiles.

History: When her mother went insane Eva couldn't bear it. The little girl that used to be so happy and bubbly all the time quickly became the opposite. Was taken to a hospital for any signs of madness but was brought back soon and taken to a child center

Token (and yes you can have hidden weapons inside tokens _): A golden chain that she has had since she was born.

Choice weapon(s): Bow and arrow

Hair color/style/length: Blond, wavy, to her midback, thick

Eye color: Light blue

Height: 4' 11"

Weight: 90 lbs.

Abilities/strengths/powers: Climbing, shooting, finding food

Weaknesses/fatal flaws: One on one combat, being surronded by people, having to give up, not being able to trust anyone

Allies with particular district? (I'll think up most of these, but if you want to specify, go ahead): District 10,

Favorite color: Yellow

Favorite food: Stew

Casual apparel: Jeans, white short, converse, hair down

Formal apparel (for the reapings and that fun stuff): Hair in braid over her shoulder, jean skirt, whit blouse

Hobbies: Singing, playing the viola

Other (mainly just stuff I forgot and you didn't): Nothing really PM me if you have any questions!
JayJayRoxxx chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Name: Rachel Jonie Lopez
Nickname: Nie*Family* Jonie* Poseidon* Lopez* Half Brother*
Gender: Female
Age:17
DOB: July 9th
Olympian Parent: Poseidon
Mortal Parent: Patricia Jenkins
Mortal Parents History: She met Poeidonand was mesmirised and asked for his nam he said Lopez. Afte 9 monthes she had Rachel and wondered why she had lake blue eyes and jet black hair. She has 4 step sisters bu they have a different dad and last name because her mom got remarried.
District: 4
Personality: Smart, Shy, Strong, Funny, Loyal, Willing
History: Born on July 9th 1996 and was a powerful child she could control the water in the sink and tub. This frightend hr mom. But se never talked about it. She always loved to be in the waer and think and loved horses. They were her only friends because everyone else thought she was a freak.
Token: A sea blue pe that when uncapped turn into a sword and dagger.
Choice Weapons: Sword and Dagger and Trident
Hair: Shoulder Length with ocean blue streaks to bring out her eyes with some braids in the back.
Eye Color: Lake Blue when happy Ocean Blue when angered or sad.
Height: 5'4
Weight: 210 lbs
Abilities/strengths/powers: Swimming, Controlling water, healing herself with water and able to drink any type of water without it be to salty or anything.
Fatal Flaw: Fear
Allies with Districts: District 12, 7, and 10
Fav. Color: Ocean Blue
Favorite Food: Pizza
Clothes: Beanies (like the hat), T-shirts, combat boots, jeans or shorts, Graphic Tees, Navy blue sneakers
Dress Clothes: Lake Blue dress, Midnight Blue Boots, Blue Beanies
Hobbies: Hunting, Swimming, Fishing, Singing, Joking