Reviews for Undefeated Troubles
JohnnyBeta14 chapter 1 . 2/3
Fantastic one-shot but Dick move with the ending.
Xerzo LotCN chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
this was kinda interesting
William chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I like this. Thanks for posting this one-shot. Ash as a kickass Frontier Brain and having a harem? Well, those are ingredients for a good read.
Oh I am Slain chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
"playing around as though they were family."
"making friends than reporting about the scene"
Quite heartwarming. :D

Pokémon (plural doesn't have 's', and usually the word should be capitalized.

between Elesa's cleavages
in Elesa's cleavage

Anyway, this was a hilarious fic. Cheers!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Interesting one-shot here. The ending sucked.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
ultimateCCC chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
You mean OOC?
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013