|Reviews for Snippet of the Aftermath|
| BriEva chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I think you did pretty well.
| Mu-Sensei chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Nicely written, if a bit short to properly judge. A few sentences seem to be incomplete or had potential for more complete descriptions, but I suppose that's intended if you're aiming for minimalism.
| Eseelti chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Hi, thought i should leave a review for you. I think it is a nice story and i believe you did a good job at describing the situation in little words which isn't as easy for many people. So yeah, i think you did well with the style.
| ezok chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
i think that this style woldn't go with yours
nice piece of work though, it's a good change compared to some of your works(real monster/harsh truth/introvert)
and about not doing this 'verse'
you could always make a story disconnected of the mainverse and go with a story about game with RL problens(selling accounts, bullying in and out of the game, etc)
| AKAAkira chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Mm, looks like it. The sentence fragments set the mood and scenes well enough, and there's enough description to actually tell the reader what's going on. Pretty neat.