Reviews for The Door That Shouldn't Be In Front Of Me
Iceleaf13 chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
I was thinking that perhaps it is a problem Loki has always had, but his magic curbed its effects. And now that his magic is gone the problem is running rampant. Maybe. Maybe not. I will have to wait and see.
Iceleaf13 chapter 9 . 12/21/2015
Wow those two are dramatic. Especially Thor.
Iceleaf13 chapter 3 . 12/21/2015
I agree: how dare he? To steal Loki's great achievement? Such an accomplishment must have taken no small effort on Loki's part. And Odin takes it just like that.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/13/2015
I KNEW IT! I knew that that was the reason Loki was ill! I feel so clever now. xD Amazing chapter btw, I do soooo love this fic!3
Brigadier7899 chapter 28 . 7/26/2015
wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Great job!
pinksugarrush chapter 3 . 6/25/2015
So sad. I hope Loki and Thor reconcile soon. I like it so far !
babyloki21 chapter 28 . 6/5/2015
This story was very beautiful... I made me cry too much! the sentiment was amazing.. I totally loved it.
BookDevourer chapter 4 . 5/28/2015
Pleasant ly surprised by Tony's and Bruce's reactions.

I hope SHIELD isn't coming to kick in the door?

Thor needs to work on his relationship with the AllFather -
Staunch Defender, or Angered yet Loyal? PR, ya know, inwardly rebellious. These are all options, right?

So far, so amazing!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2015
Okay - what is Odin thinking here?

Does he not KNOW what it means to study Loki's magic?

I really hope he doesn't believe that simply because Loki has knelt before him, Loki is "fixed"
or "better".

And - does he believe that the humans will be unable to get past Thor and TAKE Loki if they really put their minds to it?

At least Odin does acknowledge Loki - He just spoke to Thor first, one at a time is simpler after all, and telling Loki to wait while he speaks to Thor would probably simply engender mistrust - and with hints of approval and pride, no less!
However, it has come a /bit/ late.

And Thor still ... wants to protect his little brother. (Though the Avengers may not see it like that!) Also, does Thor know/remember that his brother is/was originally Jotun, and without magic will likely revert.

This was not intended as a negative comment on the story (which I am very much enjoying).
It WAS written as I read this chapter.
Thank you for this intriguing story, traveller19!
BookDevourer chapter 2 . 5/28/2015
Story so very amazing!

Oh, Frigga. Telling Loki that
the man who lied to him all these years, who would not listen,
And managed somehow to find the whorst words to say to Loki not once but Twice
And TORE AWAY HIS MAGIC so Loki could not even sooth himself after his dremas
KNOW WHAT HE'S DOING is not going to help.

Not for a while, at any rate.

And, Thor?
Constantly pushing at him to tell you all about his night terrors is Not. Going. to make him. Want to telll you.
Thor, I'm not saying you should stop visiting him (he'd probably see that as you abandoning him), but maybe stop pushing so hard?

Traveller19, this story has inspired me to respond much more than any other.
You are doing a wonderful job!
BookDevourer chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
So far, so intriguing.

Also, I'm sorry, but Odin is really not thinking through this.
Or worse, he did, And KNEW that doing this to Loki would make it (almost?) Impossible for Loki to ever consider himself an Odinsson.

Silly Thor. Perhaps Loki once was comfortrd by your presence after nitmares, but because of this he isn't going to see you as a friend- or a brother! Anytime in the near future.

Also, this chapter was very well written, and I Need to see what happens next.

Thank you, traveller19 !
KarrineGenesis chapter 3 . 2/8/2015
I just read that his eyes are green. Will you touch up on the fact people under mind control have blue eyes, he had blue eyes during the attack, and now His eyes are back to green like in the 2 Thor movies, meaning it was most likely that he was under mind control during the whole Avengers movie/time frame?
tatiana.j.davidson chapter 20 . 12/9/2014
Thor telling Odin off... now that is true love!
And Heimdall...SERIOUSLY?!
NitroFire PrevChristinaNorcinu chapter 28 . 11/5/2014
This was absolutely positively one of the most amazing stories I have read so far. Your writing is simply beautiful and I read this entire thing within 2 hours during school between doing work. I couldn't stop reading. It was amazing
Grac3 chapter 28 . 11/4/2014
I have absolutely adored reading this fic. I really enjoyed the plot. And it had just the right amount of angst and h/c. Plus, you write Pepper really well. By the way, was that little bit in the epilogue about going into space a reference to Planet Hulk?
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