Reviews for The Daughter of Tony Stark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it as always. What if injuries and stuff (bruises, scratches, etc.) that occurred in her dreams appeared on her body when she was awake. That way the avengers could find out on their own? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like loki/gypsy interaction. Its awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! SO cute! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() For the record I totally caught that reference. I really like these two as a couple and it's a good balance to the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! :D Steve is so understanding, and i really like gypsy's character |
![]() ![]() New reader here ! I LOVE this story, you're an awesome writer ! Keep up the good work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! No! No! I have an idea of how Loki will find them. Instead of Gypsy telling him. He finds put by secretly reading Fury's mind or Bruces mind or something. It makes a much better story than having your main character cave. If the main character gives up, they're all screwed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your a lot better when you do third person point of view. It makes the story sound better. By the way i was watching the Avengers when i read this so i had a double geek out! Its so good! |
![]() ![]() I like your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What if she finds out the location but doesn't give it to Loki. Then she endures so much torture before giving up. Just a suggestion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Didn't pepper tell gypsy in an earlier chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol tony. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apart from the dream that was a sweet chapter! Don't get me wrong, the dream was pretty good too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is pepper gonna tell tony bout her pregnancy? I hope so. |