|Reviews for The Daughter of Tony Stark|
| mindcrazed chapter 10 . 11/10/2014
I totally love Robert Downy Jr and Tom Hiddleston especially in their roles as Tony and Loki so those to together does things to me that I don't care to admit. Let's just say that I'm loving your story! I've been listening to ac/doc in the background and it really gets me in the right mood. I'm not sure if I want Gypsy to be with Steve or Loki though. A bit confused about that. Anyways I'm really excited to read the rest!
| Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 38 . 10/19/2014
| My Dear Frodo chapter 14 . 10/10/2014
WHERE DO YOU LIVE I MUST COME AND FIND THIS PARK IMMEDIATELY.
Amazing story by the way.
| woftattoo chapter 37 . 6/29/2014
Thor may not come back after what his teammates did to Loki. Loki may have done some terrible things but not all of it was his fault and Thor feels responsible for some of it. Loki may not have survived the beating the Avengers did to him, Gypsy was right about one thing. If Loki does pull through he'll just kill himself because he hates being imprisoned so it will be a no win situation on both parties. Thor will no longer deem the Avengers his friends after what they did to Loki he'll probably quit the team and never return to earth and stay on Asgard and become the kingdoms new ruler and marry Sif. Or if Thor does return it will be to just to help the Avengers on missions then he will return to his kingdom he won't consider the Avengers friends in his eyes the just don't understand how horrible a life Loki had on Asgard and the events that lead up to his pain and heartbreak. I personally the Avengers don't want to understand Loki no matter what Thor tells them they just see Loki as the bad guy and he isn't. I wouldn't blame Thor if he decided to cut ties with the Avengers and Shield.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
i love this chapter its nicely written.
| SnowingOnCupcakes chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
I love this story so much! Plz update the sequel soon!
| KitaraStrife chapter 27 . 11/21/2013
Oh... my... GODS! O_O I think I've had this bookmarked on my phone for, like, 10 months and JUST got around to reading it this week. o_o I haven't reviewed because I saw you completed it, but OMG. THIS chapter, reading at work (yaaay, 3rd shift!) and I have music playing on my phone and HYHJOLDE. OMG MUSIC WHAT?! SANCTUARY from Disney's THE HUNCHBACK OF NOTRE DAME soundtrack starts playing. Read your own chapter while listening to it! About 0:50 in, I get to " Tony's smiled disappeared" and I just... I HAD TO STOP to finish work. Too epic of timing to waste reading without the music. OMG! Seriously I can't-! I literally stopped reading, opened the REVIEW CHAPTER page in a new window on my phone, and started this up, adding a bit to it while waiting for my ride home when I was done with work and finishing reading and typing at home.
I love Tony stepping up and being overprotective of Gypsy, I love her name, I love Clint acting like a child at that playground-OHMYGOD THAT PLAYGROUND! I WANT IT! I had a similar one I went to a lot as a kid, but it's about 20 minute drive away from my house. :( AHEM. Yes, back on track! Is it bad I hope her stepdad shows up some time soon? You can't seriously expect me to believe someone as asshole-ish as he is to only be a one-off character who's simply mentioned after his one scene, can you? (I'll possibly have the answer already by the time you reply to this longa55 thing. XD) Loki. Oh dear, sweet mischief, LOKI! I love the dark and sinister aspect, not so keen on some wording. :/ I get the same way with Thor, but I give more leeway with Point Break since he'd be more willing to pick up on modern Midgardian speech. Loki, on the other hand, I feel would find the modern speech disdainful and therefore look down upon those who do not AT LEAST understand Old World English, aka the speech I, personally, believe he would stick to. A fair amount of authors that I read I cringe a little at the way they have Thor and Loki speak. It's prolly just me, but it detracts from his "badass" when I read him speaking like modern Midgardians would. I find him more intimidating-sexily so-when he uses old world english as his preferred speech. Again, prolly just me, but I wanted to let you know. ...Great, now I sound like an a55! DX I'll just... get back to reading now...
([ONE SONG LATER])
Unfortunately? The song ended about 6 seconds into my reading of Clint's reaction. :( But then SANCTUARY (ENDING) from KH2 played right after, so I guess that fits better for how Clint feels since it's got a melancholy feel to it. :) O_O Ooohhh, %*$# no! If Loki touches her like that, not only will Tony kill Steve, it will be AFTER Steve helps Clint, Thor and Natasha castrate and disembowel Loki, which will happen AFTER Tony and Hulk beat the 5HIT out of him!
Yup, you're officially on my faves and follow lists, this is in my fave stories list (good GODS, I have nearing 700 fave stories! o_o), and this is officially one of my two longest reviews for a story EVER!
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!
| Charlotte Wilks chapter 17 . 10/28/2013
Going to Captain America seems a bit out of character for Tony. I can't wait to read his reaction to Gypsy and Steve/Captain America!
| Charlotte Wilks chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
I liked this. Nice Pepper is very welcomed, but I really wish she wasn't pregnant.
| Charlotte Wilks chapter 8 . 10/27/2013
There's been hardly any Thor or Dr. Banner so far. Also, Gypsy needs to CALM. DOWN.
| Charlotte Wilks chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
I'm definitely liking this Steve/Gypsy thing.
| razzle-dazzle1606 chapter 38 . 10/9/2013
WAIT. WHAT. WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK.
WHY DIDN'T FANFICTION TELL ME THIS WAS UPDATED.
WHAT. WHAT. SO DONE.
So. Terribly sorry for the late review! Stupid website decided not to tell me you'd updated.
I have absolutely loved this story! Gypsy is a really fun character to read, and this will definitely be one of the fan fics that I read over again.
| iswear-thecatdidit chapter 25 . 8/4/2013
HOLY COWS! You used my idea thank you so much! This is such an amazing fic! You should definitely keep going with this character, she really is amazing!
| Tha' Drac Lord chapter 38 . 8/4/2013
Excellent work... Your work possesses this unique style that just keeps me reading... Awesome work... I must say your work is one of the best Avenger fics I've read... *whisper* my PA prepared that speech for me...
Screw the speech...
Now this what I would say... DUDE ! You ROCK MAN... You're like a word doctor or somethin'... Seriously Bro, totally lovin' the story man...
(Sorry for calling you dude, man and bro, all in one paragraph... Force of habit)
Oh and one more thing... If other readers get too impatient waitin' for this awesome story and end up killin' you, can I like have your brain...? Y'know so I can figure how you write this good...