|Reviews for first friend english version|
| CajunBear73 chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
That was out of the blue...and what comes later will be interesting..
PS: May want to break up the paragraphs for each thought or person speaking...it reads better and doesn't jumble things up.
| Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
AS CB said it is challenging in any language especially when it is not your native one.
Welcome to the KP world with this AU.
| Imyoshi chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Well you did make an English version...the English isn't bad you just need a little practice...Great so far.
| CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Interesting AU going on.
Good luck with this one, it's challenging in any language, but you'll do alright.
Welcome to KP in any language...