Reviews for Crosswinds of Fate |
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Guest chapter 8 . 6/2/2024 It's been such a long time but Im kinda rereading a lot of the good fanfics I've seen (sadly many are unfinished and quite old. They just dont write fanfiction like they used to). One thing I never got to praise you for was not making it be all about Harry. I try to avoid HP and naruto crossovers as they focus heavily on those 2 characters and are filled with really bad power fantasy fics. Weirdly enough bnha crossover fics aren't nearly as bad and I kinda hate that series. Guess it's a lot more diverse and does do things like focus on other characters. I won't lie that I heavily favor the Nasuverse more, but acknowledge the HP magic system and it being surprisingly high level and very diverse(though I disagree with the anti magic proerties of the killing curse, like say againast a noble pahntasm shirou projected. That's really high class to the point of near maifestation, and maybe ive been brainwashed by the fandom and the level of his projections, but the real reason why I dislike it is we know how ridiculous the fate system can get, such as the divine levels. You telling me the killing curse can cancel out something like Zeus's lightning bolts? I think its more like how Rin described it as a balloon, just that some magics have better resistance to being 'popped' in this analogy or even immune to being 'popped'. Ugh. Mixing systems can be complicated). The point is it feels like a really good balance to this story. We see how everyone has their own motives and actions, not some static background prop. And they have really good characterization and interactions, what I find to be really difficult to be well written in fics. To the point I think i annoy others by pointing it out, but it is difficult to make a character distinct from an archetype. Its like cywscross on AO3. Stories like swinging pendulum do a really good job of making you think 'that's ichigo' compared to others that just don't encapsulate his personality, where you feel like he can be replaced with almost any other character of that type. |
primerp65 chapter 8 . 4/18/2024 I understand it's already 8 years, but still: you have no intention of continuing your story? Just in case, in hope you simply forgot about it rather than abandoned. It is possible at least get some scripts of potential future chapters? Because from what I seen in "Story discussion" it's already has some interesting things. |
A Common Hero chapter 8 . 3/8/2024 Seems unlikely this will continue, but I hope it does. It was quite good, and you left it on one hell of a cliffhanger. |
Suzuran Kishigane chapter 1 . 2/29/2024 I understand that you're still doing this Story, and this is just a Suggestion. Why not make Shirou Emiya, Rin Tohsaka, Sakura Matou, Medusa, and Artoria Pendragon be send by Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg to the World of Harry Potter, to do said Research, but also Adopt a 6 Years Old Harry James Potter who was left in the Orphanage at his Birthdate, which everyone saw the Dursley's literally living him there with Mean Comments. What Zelretch didn't tell them is that Harry Potter is that world's Shirou Emiya, and they won't knew about it up until Zelretch decided to tell them, with Shirou seemingly believing it, and when he's questioned about it, he stated that he have the same Feeling, except for the Hostility, when he's near Archer. Shirou, Rin, and Sakura, being the non-Servants, become Harry's new Parents through the Blood Adoption Ritual. Which, unknown to them, aside for the obvious Soul Fragment of Voldemort being flushed out of Harry's Scar, his Hair Color is now the same as his Mother, Lily Jane Potter née Evans, and he somehow made his Green Eyes more of an Emerald in Color, due to the mix of Shirou's Gold Eyes and Rin's Sapphire Blue. Of course, due to them doing the Blood Adoption Ritual, Harry would gain his own Magic Circuits, while keeping his Magic Core. For fun: The Goblin's in Gringotts, decided to change Harry's Name to Harry Jane Emiya-Evans. Harry's new Family found "the Adventures of Harry Potter" Book Series which they either laugh or wonder, possibly even try or check said Locations of where Harry Potter did his Adventure and see if it's either the Author have stolen someone's Credits or not. Harry being known as a Hufflepuff rather than a Griffindor. Harry summoning his own Servant with Shirou being forced to do the same by Zelretch as a form of Birthday gift, with Harry summoning Scáthach the Immortal Lancer Gatekeeper and the Queen of the Land of Shadows, while I can't think of whom would Shirou would Summon. Just in case: I don't like Albus Dumbledore due to his literal Manipulation. I like Severus Snape but what I like more is his Reaction, especially on other Fanfiction when Harry looks more like his Mother. I ship Harry with Hermione more than Harry with Ginny or Ron with Hermione. I both like and dislike the Idea of Harry's Parents being Alive and have a Twin Brother with Harry being Forgotten and Remove from his Family by Dumbledore, you could use it, but I'd be more of a Drama than Action, but I kinda like the idea, due to the fact that it shows the difference of how Harry would be race and how he'll act and how would both versions would react to each other. I like the Idea of Scáthach being in Harry's life, due to the fact of his Location, which is stated that the Isle of Skye, where the Gate to the Land of Shadows is nearby but hidden. For Shirou's New Servant, I can't choose between Caster Artoria Avalon, Saber Mordred Pendragon, Caster Illyasviel von Einzbern, Archer Chloe von Einzbern, Assassin Kiritsugu Emiya, Assassin Jack the Ripper or any of the Saberface, Rinface, Sakuraface, Illyaface, and so on. For Harry's Servant, I was debating between Scáthach, Scáthach-Skaði, and Jack the Ripper, maybe even do where Harry have all 9 Servant Classes, aka Saber, Lancer, Archer, Rider, Caster, Assassin, Berserker, Ruler, and Avenger, possibly with the other Extra Class as well, due to him being born and given more ways to use his Magic at such a young age. I kinda want Harry to finish his School at his 4th Year, aka at the Tri-Wizard Tournament where Voldemort regain his body and such in the emd of said Tournament, but I kinda want him to go through all 7 Years as well, but I can't decide. I'm aiming for a Multi-Crossover Series with Type Moon, Harry Potter, and Percy Jackson being the Set Timelines of the Story, but Contemplating if I should add DxD and Move Harry Potter's Timeline from Harry's Birth Year of 1980 into 1988 to Match Shirou's Birth Year, or move both into 1993 to match Percy's Birth Year. I know I'm rambling but I ain't stopping you on using it, since it's a Suggestion. |
havoc764 chapter 8 . 11/5/2023 really nice crossover, while i realize this is probabaly long abandoned, i do hold some hope it will be picked up again someday. |
kyurega chapter 1 . 10/3/2023 wow, it is upsetting that it ends there |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/27/2023 I'm angry , really angry Why the fuck is there no next chapter? And holy fuck this shit is gooood |
Zigz01 chapter 8 . 2/13/2023 This story... Holy crud. I was looking for a good fate x hp story, and this was 100% it. literally everything I was looking for. shirou, rin, and arturia in the hp verse (sakrua and rider is an exteeme bonus). and your writing was INCREDIBLE. I know it's been a long time since you updated, but I would LOVE to see this continue. This may be one of my favrotire fanfics of all time. |
AidenJacksonSmithDSBB chapter 8 . 12/27/2022 I miss this book |
Dasgun chapter 1 . 11/21/2022 . . |
ManticoreBlues chapter 8 . 9/10/2022 hi, I absolutely love this fanfic, it's a great work of literature. I was wondering if it was discontinued, moved to a different app/website, on a super super long hiatus? I would absolutely adore it if you continue this great work and I appreciate you having written all that you already have as I've had a great time reading this. regardless of it's current status |
pdena23 chapter 1 . 6/11/2022 Nevermind, I didn't realize the story was dead. Still, it was good while it lasted |
pdena23 chapter 8 . 6/11/2022 Interesting story, I'm looking forward to the reveal of their identities |
DarkBan chapter 8 . 5/31/2022 Shame you stoped writting, but it was really entertaining while it lasted! :) |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/1/2022 Shame this is dead. |