Reviews for Mafia Princess
zpower21 chapter 46 . 2/3
I'm a tad bit confused here. Why is this johnlock being posted in mafia princess? Did I miss something?

~Z~
glo4twilight chapter 32 . 2/3
Haha i love that charlie introduced him as her bf. Lol. Showed that stupid skank that 'hands off'. Aro is such a dick and his family are dicks too.
glo4twilight chapter 31 . 2/3
Wow so esme and carlisle don't know the details yet he spilled his guts to bella. Yep hes hooked i love it ! And as always i love his pov. It melts me. Magnificent frickin writing
glo4twilight chapter 30 . 2/3
Ohhh this was so good. So glad he shared his story with bella. How horrible for him to have a life like that. Glad too that he shared with bella about how her touch doesn't affect him awww.
glo4twilight chapter 29 . 2/3
Wow that was intense and sad. Hmmm i think maybe jacob seriously does blame charlie but this is what body guards do right? They're supposed to protect you with their life. Billy knew this.
glo4twilight chapter 28 . 2/3
Me too! Edward can put my hand anywhere on him mmm mm. So much hotness he fucking oozes that shit lol
glo4twilight chapter 27 . 2/3
Bella really is a lovely person when shes not being a brat
glo4twilight chapter 26 . 2/3
or not! i guess all that touching really did get to him. so sad. i love angie though she's funny. bella was pretty onto it with the whole bf thing to uncle cenzo. i'm really enjoying this love your work
glo4twilight chapter 25 . 2/3
haha i like uncle cenzo. he kissed edward on the cheek. before he could react i guess. love angie's assessment of edward.
glo4twilight chapter 24 . 2/3
yay she's finally pulled her finger out and is behaving. edward is struggling but otherwise doing ok with the whole touching thing. hmm be interesting to see how things go with the whole fighting thing.
glo4twilight chapter 23 . 2/3
oh i don't know i think masturbatory lemons aren't too bad... this one pretty good ... especially when it's edward. because it's all about him you know lol. but the real deal really does things to me especially a dirty talking edward.
glo4twilight chapter 22 . 2/3
i love this charlie. he loves and adores his daughter yet he's so firm with her. and in turn bella really loves him. its so lovely. i'm glad charlie made her pull her head in and apologize to edward and adjust her attitude! she's lovely when she's lovely.
glo4twilight chapter 21 . 2/3
haha well i wondered if that was the case. that she thinks because he's her body guard she can't have him at all. and yes you'd have to be blind deaf and dumb to not see anything other than how hot n sexy edward is
glo4twilight chapter 20 . 2/3
well i have to say that i really am enjoying this drabble story very much. as i said before this is the first one i've ever read i'm not normally interested at all. bella really is being a brat and edwards right...she was will to jump into bed with him and now she's making like she can't stand him. guh! women!lol
glo4twilight chapter 19 . 2/3
haha it is kinda funny how she is towards him but i'm sure it's because deep down she really likes him alot...well according to after meeting him in the club she did. edward seems to be pretty patient tho. love your work! now i have to go deal with some RL shit for awhile! dammit! i hate to be taken away from a damn good story!
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