|Reviews for Dragon Undefeated!|
| CelticReaper chapter 3 . 1/8
woohoo! and update!
Twilight, sweetheart, stop faffing about and drag your dragon to the bedroom and claim him already!
update soon please, i crave MOAR!
| Wing Zero 032 chapter 3 . 1/8
Well, that escalated quickly, because it looks like Celestia and Luna will get their two toys soon now that those two grifons are officially targeted by Spike after that brutal beat donw they gave to poor Rainbow
Now that will be another mare for Spike harem, first and with dibs on him is actually Twilight, Seconds is Pinkie, Third will be Rainbow, Rarity will be last because she lost the chance of becoming first.
So being led to a date-rape by the female is the standard courting method in Ponyville? No wonder why Twilight got worried that Spike was turned into a manwhore by Pinkie
Great job, update soon
| He23t chapter 3 . 1/8
This is awesome!
| CelticReaper chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
ha! awesome chapter
when will we have some Splight action?
update soon please
| Wing Zero 032 chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
Did I just read Celesita's letter right?, did they had inverted tentacle rape monster sex and actually broke it beyond repair... that poor guy must have now mental scars and issues as big as the moon, LET'S SEE WHO WILL BE THEIR NEXT VICTIM!
| Karlos1234ify chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
They have a habit of breaking toys.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
| CelticReaper chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
this is awesome :D
| Elizander chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
I like the premise. I like the set up. But everything else... Let's just say that all the respect I once had for you is now more dead than Capcom's artistic integrity.
| Heartless demon wolf chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
A seriously very impressive idea, and I like how the ponies have fur and the like but also fingers, anthro I think, but the sentence structure is...very hard to understand.
This needs to be edited for grammar and spelling and needs a bit more details when it comes to OC, honestly the humor seems, forced to say the least. Do a bit of a re write with this and I have no doubt it will be more famous. Nonetheless, you have my full attention with the summary and the chapter, I can't wait for more.
| MR Nuke chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
OMG!OMG!OMG! This is too much I can't stop laughing! "BUUUCCKKK!" HAHAHA! XD Also will Deep Depression be finished?
| Silverwing58 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Oh...my...god... that was AWESOME! That last comment made me laugh for 12 minutes! keep it up.
| beirirangu chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
the bad grammar and the way it's written makes it hard to understand at times... like the scene with the guy in sugarcube corner: I had to remind myself what was going on while I was reading it because I was so confused as to what was going on
but that might've just been me
| Karlos1234ify chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
This is awesome.
I loved Ultimate Muscle as a kid.