|Reviews for Marooned|
| Miss Peg chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
There are some really significant themes in this story, I really like the emotion that's caught up between the paragraphs. Maybe keep an eye out for typos/small mistakes. I really like that you've contrasted the two paragraphs - Jane's and Lisbon's. Not only starting them the same but ending them the same gives them such a great sense of circulation.
| tromana chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is excellent. Short and it cuts straight to the bone. You show a good understanding of the catch-22 situation. I really enjoyed this.
| Jane Doe51 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
That's so true : she will get hurt...I'm afraid to find out how much...
'He should have left long ago, but now he can't (...) She should have walked away long ago and now she can't.'
Ouch ! A subtle reminder that 'some things are impossible to escape'...they're stuck in this situation...let's hope they'll find a way out, together !
| make-mine-a-kiaora chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
| Sue Shay chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
"He's in a catch 22 situation neither staying or leaving will save her."
What a great observation! Love the tone of that line.
Very good, Julie!
| Mossi.b chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
This is good and so true, he really is damned if he does, and damned if he doesn't...if he leaves, RJ will just hurt Lisbon to bring him back, and if he stays she is more than likely to get hurt...or worse...You have summed up his huge problem...excellent