Reviews for Don't Look Behind You
cheshire shadow chapter 3 . 9/15/2015
awesome. please update. have you forgotten your unfinished story? its so creative its perfect. that sounds exactly like use absorb.
Oathkeeperlord chapter 3 . 3/22/2015
Awsome. But I think you really did forget about the story. Please don't quit now! It could be an awesome story if you finish it!
Oathkeeperlord chapter 3 . 3/16/2015
Awsome. But I think you have forgotten about your story. Or is this a prologue and you completed it under a different name? If you did you didn't say what it was called you left a cliffhanger. I hope it gives you an email don't leave it blank!
BBxRae forever chapter 3 . 4/2/2014
Please continue on the story I really liked it and keep up the good work, my friend
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
Wtf! You bitch!
BethyQuake chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Oh. My. Gosh
ooh and pleaser continue I can't stand the suspense!
Ribke chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I remember that one time I played Slender with my mom. I was at zero pages and I fooled around in the building for a bit too long and suddenly I turn a corner and there he is... mom got so scared she punched me in da face :(
grace24578 chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more! add more!
Princess Unikitty chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
very interesting development. keep it up.
xXxMillaxXx chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Secret Girl chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Noooooooooooooo. You have got to finish the next chapter soon. i want to see what happens finish it soon. Secret Girl
CleoArrow chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
BB/Rae yay! I'm so excited to see what happens! And thanks for updating! I'm curious as to what will occur next!
raven bunina chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
I've heard about the Slenderman game before, and I've seen drawings of him on some of the websites I go on, but I've never actually played the game. I don't think I'd want to. xD It would probably scare me out of my skin.

Anyway, I was reading this fairly early in the morning in my basement in complete darkness. And I would occasionally look behind myself after reading the part in Chapter Two where the screen reads "Don't look behind you." And I became freaked out by anything that was unrecognizable in the room to the point where I turned on the basement lights. x3

Crud, now look what you've done. I'm scared.

...Nice story you got here, by the way. :3 I can't give much feedback, though, because I haven't a clue about most of the things in the Slenderman game. HOWEVER, I have to agree with Spartan Ninja that Raven wouldn't reference from a show that much to the point where she actually tries to copy it. Maybe she reads about in a book? x3 She /was/ doing some research on the Slenderman earlier on in the story.

Keep on writin'! :D
Spartan Ninja chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
I don't think Raven would do something like that just because she saw it on TV. A bit OOC, no? She'd think stuff through before she does anything. Still, good chapter thoug, please update soon.
Robstarforever2017 chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
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