Yes, please continue.

I wonder will Shirou stay in this world and will he become a pairing with Louise as you know the Familiar of Zero has a Romantic ending.

Please continue.

Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon. I just can't wait for Arturia to be summoned by Tiffania as her familiar and for her and shirou to reunite.

I liked the chapter!

It's your story and you choose how to write it, but I think you should get rid of the whole Lecture thing at the end. Explain what's happening in the story through the story, not some section at the end. That's just my opinion on the subject though.

Honestly, bringing in other heroic spirits ruined this story beyond repair imo.
Terrible idea overall.

The writing quality was solid and the story was enjoyable to read for the most part. Until chapter 3. Then it went downhill pretty fast.

When I read this story for the 1st time, I stopped after the chapter when Perseus showed up. I don't remember why but it's probably because I was looking for a where Nasuverse rekts everyone. So back then I didn't continue it. But after a few months and the Fate-tinted glasses wear out I start too enjoy other stories again and got back to this. I think this is great, this might be because this isn't the most... extreme Fate story I have read that goes to another Fate/Familiar crossover. So with that as a comparison, this is great in comparison to that and the average stories that did not get it just right, so props to you for striking that balance.

Too overpowered... I guess I've been spoiled by the Hill of swords story and I can't help but compared them a bit. Yeah I understand why shirou is so powerful but damn I didn't expect him to be that powerful.

After re-reading your stories for about the tenth time, I have to admit that Gavilain is so much better than the monstrosity that was Escalvatine. No offense intended with that. But as awesome as it was for Shirou to have an Anti-World Phantasm, it was absurdly excessive in hindsight. Gavilain simply suits him better. Well done.

read alot through and i know rin isnt truly dead they never stay dead;)

This is really well written and a pleasure to read. I reread it often when browsing fanfic and look forward to more as you have time to complete your work.

And I thought the fight scenes were perfectly done in the setting they were meant for. Lancelot had no real desire to injure Shiro, and Shiro had no desire to try and injure Karin. Contests, not all out combat. Well written as just that, too.

And I thought the build up was excellent as well. Not too over drawn and covering everything of importance, leading up to the initial contest between Servant and Mother.

Well Done.

I'm just like, eh, prolly just a zero fighter, or some random NATO spec jet.

Vimana. Godamnit Vimana.
WHAT

The fight is super epic. Though I finished reading all chapters in a day . Though I like the length of each chapter. Bring on those almost impossibly long chapters. (Cause it kills my boredom).

While the memory rampage alongside the real life rampage was a bit predictable, it didn't make it any less satisfying to read. Good job.

-Zetsumei